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I couldn't save them.....my brother made me not to.....as I bash onto my bubble prison I scream for her to stop.....but she didn't......you know what she said after she killed everything i knew?
Monster.....all of your kind are monsters...
And after years of those words I held that grudge monster you say Celestia?
You are the monster my dear
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Why u make such sad stories?
By the way if you need a proof reader, i'd be more than happy to help you
you're*
rarely*
"we are the *original* form of Draconequus."
"and I laid *there* crying"
"Your kind are *monsters*"
etc.
Tons of grammar and spelling mistakes. For example when Celestia started to speak you should have put her words in quotes.
But it's a good story premise if a little short. I'll give it a like.
I know this is a stupied thing to say but there gods how did they not beat one alicorn?!?!?
Oh yeah good job but why so sad?
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Apparently Celestia had some how persuaded the other Alicorns that Discord's kind had to be killed. Not sure why though.... why did they do what they did? Why doesn't Discord get revenge on Celestia?
THE TRUTH MUST BE KNOWN!!
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YESSSSS HELP ME
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They couldn't fight back because of the Sun Fire remember only the very powerful Draoncaquuis like Strings could fight back.
If not understanding:
Golden Fire:
A rare golden flame only created by either the princess or the student..it's powerful flames are 25,0000 degrees and another to kill Draoncaquuis
Kind of reminded me of this
Although this story a tad sadder.
clap...clap....clap, clap, clap, clap CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAPCLAPCLAPCLAPCLAPCLAP BRAVO BRAVO !
2983735 But there gods... By the in the description it should "my brother made me unable to". I hope Im right about that if not forget I said anything. like ever. Have a good lifetime.
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Love that Song
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Thanks and its good for someone to add the pieces to my story
And for everyone....IM GUNNA MAKE DISCORD TRACEPORT TO ANOTHER WORLD.
2983796 I do too, it seems that a few of the lines in the song apply to this story, and may apply if there is a sequel.
One line that comes to mind, "The monster that you saw me for, is the monster I became"
That and "It feels like a fell asleep, and woke up in a nightmare"
Just seemed to fit.
Edit: Oh my Luna. After hearing the song again there are quite a few bits of the song that seem to apply to this story. hehe
2983796 2 things 1 How did I help I mean I wont credit where it belongs And 2 I think discord as h8 seed described it in neverending strife.
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Wow.....never knew I could right a story that fits with a song without knowing it
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1: yup 2: defiantly
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I still dont understand how I helped I told you to rephrase I call that the um the fear of Chuck Norris: logic. 
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Can you explain a bit more cant understand what your saying
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Just message me any time you need help
2983992 Alright ( I see how I make no sence at all Im really good at that) Ok you said that I help peice together youre story when I told you to rephrase a sentince in the desription of the fic sorry for being inconprehensible.
I can see how that could be intended for others.
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Thanks
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Ok also I did a new story called Luna's Rebellions
2984019 By the way super job job 4 fics in your fist week right?
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Yup
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Yup
2984025Is it bad Im listening to mic the microphone zero while waiting for this to rephresh?
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You work quickly, don't you
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HOW DO YOU KNOW
DID GANDALF TELL YOU MY SECRETS AGAIN
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....No....
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STOP IT GANDALF
2984040Then how did you figure it out?
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But Gandalf likes your work, why would you want him to stop?
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HE USES MIND POWERS TO SEE INTO YOUR MIND AND GOD-DAMN SEES INTO YOUR SOUL
2984047But the only thing humans have is computers and equestrians dont are you next to the portal? Equestria Girls refrence.
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Oh......so he likes my work or does he want to destroy all life
2984056Both
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A bit of both really
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In fact I am
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Bitch I might be
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LANGUAGE
2984062I summon the power of the closet princess cadence to attach a plank of to the mirrior.
youre move
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I believe it is english
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I use to portal to summon PINKAMENIA DIAN PIE
2984066A universal of communicating then humans ruined it by making more.
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STOP OT TROLLESTIA OR INWILL SUMMON MOLESTIA
2984069I use my connection to call upon the creator la la la what damn whats here the crater of the show screw other equestria has guns *bang*
.
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Implying I wouldn't enjoy Molestia being here
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DAMN IT
wait.....
CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS GENDER DISCOVERS YAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY
