A message I've thought much too much about,
Maybe it'll reach somebody, who can say?
Certainly, I've always been this way,
A patched up, crazy matryoshka
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10/10, it's pretty darn rad. I really love the tone this sets, how in-character everyone feels, and I 'ain't seeing no spelling mistakes.
La Le Lu Li Lo
Special thanks to Kragor, Harime Nui, and Dunsparce for prereading and making me confident enough that my attempt at a weird story went well.
Let's see how people interpret this thing, because currently I have like three possible interpretations about why Twilight was acting strange. There's symbolism/implied stuff for all the theories, but there might be more I haven't thought of.
Coo-coo for KoKo Puffs is not an acceptable theory, no matter how great Ko is
I had a theory but I forgot :T
Jeez this was really... something. Really glad I read this and I'm not sure how to feel about it. Definitely one of my faves of yours, sweetie. Nothing bad stood out and really everything was as it should be for a random. Excellent work. You make me proud
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ehehe >3<
I-bu-it-uh-WHAT?
That's literally the only reaction I have! Just: WHAT?! Like, I want to do some sort of analysis, but I can't! There's, like, nothing to analyze! It's TOO weird! Twilight goes batshit and starts acting out a Vocaloid song? Or is it something else? Don't ask me, I don't f*cking know!
In a more serious tone.... I literally have no words. I am completely speechless. And if I was completely honest with you?
I don't think that's a good thing. There's this kind of line between good and bad stories. But, when it comes to super-weird-mind-fuckery like this, it's not so much a 'line' as it is an ultra-thin barrier that will break if you so much as think about it. And you are, at the very least, skirting that barrier dangerously closely with this story.
Of course, this is all my opinion, which means nothing until I become an official critic(
HA! Like that'll happen!).
I regret not knowing much about Vocaloid lore
The insanity is delicious.
An unseen horror out of the blackness,
to find the single light of friendship
and flicker out.
Another nightmare will
surely
break
your
love
Excellent work, dear Author!
dis needs more likes
An interesting twist to the songs meaning.
But isn't mostly about people trying to escape their over growing madness of solitude, dancing and getting drugged before getting themselves killed? But I do like the theory they do turn mad, but then again everybody mad more or less, its only how much restraint we have to not let takes other's down with us XD.
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The song has a lot of theories surrounding it, with none of them denied or confirmed by Hachi
Heck, one of the theories is that the song doesn't mean anything at all, and there's actually proof for it
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Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu the song means something
Who or what is a matryoshka?
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Technically, a matryoshka is the proper name for the Russian nesting dolls. They can also be used as an analogy for the many "layers" that a person has.
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Technically, a matryoshka is the proper name for the Russian nesting dolls. They can also be used as an analogy for the many "layers" that a person has.
I don't get it.
I don't get it
Well, that led absolutely nowhere.
One, two, three, four!
A message I've thought much too much about,
Maybe it'll reach somebody, who can say?
Certainly, I've always been this way,
A patched up, crazy matryoshka
A package sung by a headache
Time may pass, but the hands are at 4
Don't tell anyone;
The world will turn upside down
Ah, I feel broken apart
Throw out all your memories, too
Ah, how I want to know,
To the deep down...
Um, well...
If you please, dance more and more
Kalinka? Malinka?
Just play the chord
What should I do about such feelings?
Can't you tell me? Just a little?
Loud and clear, 524
Freud? Keloid?
Just hit the key
Everything, all's to be laughed at
Hurry, dance, with all your foolishness
Clap your hands, not entirely childish,
And watch, to this purposefully-crazed tune
Certainly, I don't care either way
The warmth of the world is melting away
You and me, rendezvous? Rendezvous? Rendezvous?
Oh, or out on a hopping adventure?
With a crooked gait, one-two, one-two
Ah, I'm ready to burst out;
Catch every part of me
Ah, with both your hands,
Catch me for me
Um, well...
Listen a little - it's something important
Kalinka? Malinka?
Just pinch my cheek
It's just that I can't control myself
Should we do more fantastic things?
Pain, hurt, but no, don't cry
Parade? Marade?
Just clap some more
Wait, you say, wait, wait
Before we drop to just one...
You and me, rendezvous?
Rendezvous? Rendezvous?
Oh, or out on a hopping adventure?
With a crooked gait, one-two, one-two
Down with a sickness?
Show me your song!
See how today...
I'm still a patched up, crazy matryoshka!
If you please, dance more and more
Kalinka? Malinka?
Just play the chord
What should I do about such feelings?
Can't you tell me? Just a little?
Loud and clear, 524
Freud? Keloid?
Just hit the key
Everything, all's to be laughed at
Hurry, and dance no longer!
Smooch, smooch...
Its a Vocaloid song for those who dont know.
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gosh I put a link and everything so people wouldn't think I just spouted random nonsense for no reason but it looks like that didn't work
well I kinda did spout random nonsense but ehh
This reminds me of that song called Matryoshka by Hatunse Miku, I'm ammusing this story is from that song since the cover art is much like it
Interesting job on the story by the way!
YouTube link is dead.
As for depictions of insanity, have you seen Unwell?
4989599 It's pretty much literally the song lyrics worked into a story, so yeah.
Very interesting concept, but the writing style is rather dry. The sentence structures are also repetitive.