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I loved this, hit all the right spots! Good job!


I already clicked away then came back to comment, so I can’t quote it specifically, but during Cadence and Shining’s kiss at the beginning of the big scene, there is one pronoun mix up where Star is referred to as She.

Only error I saw though ^-^

Mix-up #2 · Jan 2nd, 2023 · · 1 ·

Fun read, I love seeing the nervous wreck Star Tracker getting involved with the sparkles as a sub. I hope you will do more of those in the future.

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