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Shakespearicles
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"But then if we do not ever take time, how can we ever have time?"
I remember reading that.
Superb
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Well this was a really fun read, I wonder if the twins were part of the cup holding games they used to do?
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Are... are you trying to say, 'cuckolding'?
9658949 It's a line from The Matrix Reloaded, spoken by the Merovingian in the restaurant scene.
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There should be another chapter where they tell him
9659101 Yep, just doing my civic duty.
1000 Ways to Die Season 2 Episode 2
Those freaking chapter titles, though.
9659309 I remembered that episode. Good times
I laughed.
Poor Pound being in her sister's shadow when it comes to baking.
Another quality fic from Shakespearicles. I eagerly await the father's day sequel.
This was both funny and hot.
Sweet, funny and sexy. Well done!
I just wanted to let you know, I took a look at the chapter names first, then noticed your recent profile pic. I got a good laugh from that.
a grate story awesome righting.
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A sequel is being written for the June'19 Wincest Contest.
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Ok I'm looking forward to it
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He also used it in one of his Blog Posts.
9660066 Your in-depth knowledge about me is both flattering and concerning.
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I'm just good at remembering sentences. Also it helps that I can relate to it, since I also struggle with my time management.
So, how do you like my attempt at an aftermath to this story?
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Ah, Mother's Day. That special time of year when FiMFiction's collective Oedipus Complex reaches a fever pitch and the feature box is filled with mother-loving. Stay classy, folks.
*reads title*
"... To the gun show, and I'm not givin' em to yeh!
I'm goin' with YOUR ticket!"
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So, can we get a sequel like that?
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I'll be waiting for that...
I feel really bad for Carrot Cake. He’s probably the longest-suffering stallion in all of My Little Pony fanfiction. I appreciate the depth and complexity of the relationships you have here. It’s not Grimm tier, mind you, but it’s pretty damn close, perhaps closer to an inverse - I want to see these relationships succeed, rather than dreading the fallout of them falling apart.
This is a pretty strong showing overall. I do think the first half could have afforded to have been a little bit longer and in-depth, as the second half was. And you’ve got a lot of really evocative sentences and phrases all around here - loved how you described a sunset as a kiss - but it’s mixed in with a fair bit of prose that’s more mechanical, a description of what’s happening as opposed to an exploration of what what’s happening means, if that makes any sense.
Still, it’s clear I left Wincest in strong hands. Perhaps the world’s strongest hands. God forbid I manage to catch them.
Wonder what dad and sis were doing back home.
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9667368 Well, anyways. It was a lovely, well built-up romance from the Mastur Bard himself, so how could I complain. It could have used a bit yet more description. Think about it: A train ride through the darkness of the night, but where were the clangs of the traintracks, the swaying from side to side, the moon and the stars dimly illuminating the room as the only candle bringing light to the room fell down and was extinguished, the perverted noises of lovemaking, the random eyes of the conductor falling on them through a crack in the wall as he... anyways. More stuff for all senses would have been fun. Now the scene could have taken place anywhere, in a bedroom just as well as a train. I did greatly appreciate the amount of smells and tastes you used, though I've never seen cider act that fast and hard. These ponies must have Japanese livers.
And remember kids! Don't mix drugs and alcohol. It's not good for you and might make you perform incestuos pedo sex.
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Hmmm, it's almost as if the cider had nothing to do with their actions...
Oh, a sequel/tie in dealing with Carrot and Pumpkin is perfect for a use of "Pound Town forever, bro!" a la A Slap on Titan.
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Bleh...
I'm sorry, this didn't work for me. The dialogue between mother and son just doesn't sound right here. It took me right out of the story.
Aw, that was so fun! I liked it a lot.
Particularly the dynamics between Pound and Cup.
Lovely work.
Carrot must eternally be the least satisfying lay on Fimfiction.
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For once I am glad to be wrong.