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Don't make the same mistake I made, kids; When the police shout "drop it!", that doesn't refer to your pants.

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Why are Cake Twin incest stories always so common? Like, seriously every clopfic I've seen pairs those two up with each other.

I can't speak for anyone else, but for me it was convenience. They're the same age, there's a pre-established closeness between them, and I could write a compelling narrative involving several themes.

To extend on the author's comment, it is also because they are mostly blank slates. We only know them as infants, so authors can give them almost any personalities and have a lot of options in giving back stories.

Wait, that's the end? Aw man, I wanna see where this goes. I need more man. :(

"Red, I..."

Who is Red?

That is explained in the next chapter, if only barely. And by barely I mean one line.

There was meant to be an extra scene, but I ran out of time writing it. Had to summarise it here, but basically it would end with the entire family making up and looking forward to the future together. You didn't miss much, maybe 2,000 words.

I mean, I can't make you do anything, but I can say I would absolutely LOVE a sequel. Regardless, this story has earned you a follower. And I usually don't even like humanized stories.

I haven't been on fimfic in like a year. Came back for some casual clop, stayed for the super sweet story :heart: :heart:

Oh, wow, this was great, seriously fucking great!

Best story I never knew there was.

Is there such thing as a heart boner? Because I think I just came in my arteries from how wholesome and wonderful this ride of a story was. Thank you so, so much for creating this. I'm a little disappointed there was no lemons after Nightmare Night, it fit with the story beautifully.

I can’t tell if you’re being sarcastic or not, but for the record? I liked it a lot. The sex and the feels were very well written.


I am being completely serious.

And I took you seriously, that still doesn’t answer the question. Were you being sarcastic, or not?


I ranked this story my personal #1 in the contest.

Thank you very much, I'm glad I inspired such feeling, in all senses of the term.

The conflict and dialogue here is incredible. I'm definitely going to take notes.:pinkiehappy:

I just found this and I am amazed! I honestly didn't expect a clop story to have this much emotion. You did an incredible job, really really amazing stuff. Have you ever considered writing a sequel or something? Up to you of course, but after reading this, I'm hungry for more. Amazing work!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I've been in the process of writing an epilogue for a while now, but commissions have always got in the way. I hope to write it out soon and give this story a nice proper closure as I intended. There's no plan for a sequel, and honestly, I'm not sure I could do it justice. This entire fic took shape as I wrote it, and writing a sequel would be time consuming and wholly underwhelming at the end of it. I hope the epilogue will do well enough to sate the itch for more of this story.

That's 100% fair, I'm looking forward to it!

Only thing I disagree with this ending is Pound not revealing the truth about that whore.
Because whores like her never change, in real life they always find a way to cheat and cheat some more.
They addicted to cheating and will still do it.


Incest is the best put your sibling to the test.

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