Don't make the same mistake I made, kids; When the police shout "drop it!", that doesn't refer to your pants.
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This comment is out of place, but for whatever reason, the titles would be dope if it was 'Tumble with Rumble' to keep the rythme alive IMO. Beyond that, though, good work!
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That's something I should've thought about. Consider it done.
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You're a good man.
Keep well and write well.
~ Yr, Pal, B
Speech 100
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Now I’m curious – what was the previous title?
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"Tumblin' with Rumble". Had less poetic flair to it, but I didn't think it through as much as I usually would since this was a request I just copy-pasted over from a word document. I normally write with a theme or narrative in mind, which makes naming the chapters and story easier, but I don't tend to do that with requests or commissions. The result is that the wording is sometimes a bit sloppier than in my other works.
Finally a CMC foursome that doesn't involve Spike.
#rekt
Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work? I want to know so I can add it to the All Things Femdom group.
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It's depends on what you consider to be sufficient, I suppose. At one point, Scootaloo dominates Rumble and forces him to debase himself to the group, and there's a part following that where Apple Bloom rides him while Scootaloo sits on his face, both of which is essentially them using his body while he lays there and takes it. It's not massively prolonged femdom, but there is at least one substantial example in the story. If that counts, then by all means add it to the group.
Wonder if Spike and Gabby have the castle for themselves?
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I'm busy with commissions at the moment, but that could become its own story.