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Kamahido


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Twilight may have had a bit too much to drink one night and accidentally brought a human named Arc from Earth to Equestria. They have much to teach one another! That is... if they will accept him into their society. Time will tell if humans and ponies can truly live together in harmony!

This is quite a long story I originally wrote for my wife as a Christmas present two years ago. Work on it has continued over the past year, and just recently hit 1,000,000 words! I'll upload it chapter by chapter as fast as I can translate them! The Equestrian Odyssey contains many characters from the show and comics, as well as a number of original characters I dreamed up to fill various roles. I hope you enjoy the first volume of my first ever story as much as my wife and I did!

Chapters (142)
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Comments ( 223 )

Work on it has continued over the past year, and just recently hit 1,000,000 words!

Why did you make it that long? Ah well, at least the chapters are short.

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Because that's what my wife wanted, as she really likes LONG stories. The chapters do get longer as the story goes on though, averaging roughly fifteen printed pages per chapter.

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Just wait for "Volume 2 - The Wanderer." Twilight isn't done screwing up yet! First chapter of which to be released tomorrow evening.

Just like in the show, Twilight often times makes her own problems by not thinking things through and stressing over that which she doesn't need to. Similarly to real life, such things don't usually end well... for anyone concerned.

I just realized that writs are basically quests in all but name.

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Pretty much. I always liked the term better though. Originally heard it in The Elder Scrolls III: Morrowind. Changed its meaning a bit to not involve assassination and or death.

Whoever Moonlit Dusk is, he's a fucking scumbag.

Twilight, you fucking idiot! You robbed Dinky of a father.

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That event was actually based on a real life experience my wife had many years ago. More on that in a later volume.

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You'll have to read Volume 2 - The Wanderer to see how that ends. Here's a hint! Not well. :-) Chapters uploaded daily.

this is a great story, cant wait to see more. Also, I hope that Celestia will not try to harm Arc at all. I am worried there may be conflict there.

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Glad you like it! And as far as Princess Celestia goes let's just say that's... complicated.

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That I shall. As fast I can translate it! :-D

God I love it when people use a super-positive person as their main character. It's just enjoyable.

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Arc is probably the most... understanding person you could ever meet. However, just like any normal human, there are certain things that can set him off! His past, along with a deeper understanding of his personality will follow.

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Well that's good to here. There's a big difference between super-positive and a Mary-Sue.

God, I play too much total war warhammer. Obviously Arc was the general, Marquis was a monster unit, the Crytal empire and Ponyville were allied reinforcements, and Derpy Hooves was a hero unit.
Did I mention I like total war warhammer?

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Heard of the game, but never played it before.

welp Arc, certainly has his hands full with ember, and possibly even more of a future relationship with twilight. cant wait to see how this all comes out. Great job writing and keep it up, but dont overdo it.

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Thanks! Glad you're enjoying the story thus far! In the volumes to come will be many more characters both familiar and new along with expanding relationships! Here's to hoping you like the next chapter which will be released tomorrow... Volume 3 - The Warrior!

I love these recap. It makes me feel like I'm watching the end of a Pokemon episode, so you've struck nostalgic gold.

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Thanks! I'm also working on adding "Journal Entries" to my blog for each chapter. As the story deepens, so will Arc's feeling. Think of it kinda like him monologuing as he shares his personal opinion on certain events. Things her wouldn't admit to ANY of the characters, as they are deeply personal. While they are starting out as just an emotional outlet for him, they will soon expand!

“I just want to go on record as saying this is the worst plan in the long, sad history of bad plans!”

I feel like this is a movie quote but I can't place it at all.

Twilight needs such a beating . How can she banish someone there but can't "banish" a rescue party.

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I had the same feeling too when I read that part with my wife. If anyone knows for sure, feel free to let us know!

Mawidge! Mawidge is what bwings us together today!

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I figured out what the misquote is it's this
"Taking dinosaurs off this island is the worst idea in the long sad history of bad ideas and I'm gonna be there when you learn that".

First off Kamahido, I think that quotes from one of the Jurassic Park movies, and secondly, just call it the Spear of Justice, you know you want to.

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he is correct its Ian Malcom to Peter Ludlow when their discussing dinosaurs on Isla Sorna.

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Holy crap! I haven't seen that movie since it was in theaters!

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I would call it the Spear of Justice, but... I can't say due to spoilers in an untranslated volume that has yet to be posted. :-)

Very well done. You kept my interest and I am looking forward to more.

The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study and be evil." - Reykan

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Thank you! I'm doing my best to release a chapter a day, so check back often!

you know its kinda amusing. You added a character named Maximilian. That's my name! anyways, i am loving the direction that this is going. I also hope they can find Celestia soon.

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Glad you like it. The squad's names were taken from an old PlayStation 2 game I played years ago called Growlanser.

Arc's team consists of Heavy, Engineer, Spy, and Miss Pauling. I play too many video games.

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They needed to have diverse skill sets for... uh... future reasons! :-)

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Oh my god they're the A-team. The A stands for Arc. How am I just now realizing this.

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Holy crap, you're right!!! How did I MISS THAT?!

I love it when a plan comes together. #hadtobesaid

This is the closest Arc will have to a family.

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Perhaps. Then again, perhaps not.

folks need heroes to look up to! Gives em' hope! ”

I do detect s little Sgt. Johnson in here.

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