Morality. It's something that everyone knows, yet is subjective to each being. So, when ones way of life is threatened, their morality is put into question and they need to defend themselves, most would go to extreme methods. But what if the weapon that they make gets their own sense of morality? Forged through fire and blood, was a warrior, made to be the perfect fighter. However, he was left incomplete. He wanders, trying to find something that could make him whole.
Note: Sex is implied, though not detailed. Death and minor gore is prevalent from chapter to chapter, though nothing graphic.
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First couple chapters have been rewritten to fit my current style, and the current goal of this story. We love consistency.
Я пока не читал, но надеюсь зайдёт.
Plizz more
This is awesome
. Hope there will be more in the future. Keep up the good work 
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LOL
We need more chapter 10.
Did he turn into a philly or a colt? You say philly but say he
And Human fanatic Lyra?
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as it was my first chapter, there were many mistakes, but he did turn into a colt.
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I used Lyra in the first chapter as a sort of explanation on why she's so interested in humans. Everything I write in each chapter will lead up to something sooner or later. Keep that in mind.
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Does this Fanfic count as an Alternate Universe? I haven't read it yet so I'm trying to organize my FimFiction bookmarks lol
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Maybe Human Loving Lyra
It's just me or the battle scene against Luna was a reference to Hollow Knight? Specially in the God Master DLC on the battle against Paint Master Shero?
I... can’t get into it. It’s an interesting story, don’t get me wrong, but it has such a severe case of “going too fast” syndrome. There was no time to process anything, or react to anything. It was one thing after the other, no breaks, no time, no emotion.
You need to slow down your writing, as it is, as I said, I can’t get into it. It feels too emotionless and goes way too fast and it completely ruins it for me.
Philly? I don't think that's the word you wanted to use...
Oh man. Imagine what would've happened if he listened to George Carlin before getting hit.
this is dubbed my favorite chapter
I couldn't breathe when Skystrike started singing Witch Doctor with 'FlutterGuy'
Statement: Think you got something wrong.
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“Rainbow dash, who would abandon her friends for her own gain, represents the spirit of loyalty!” Red glowing shards floated around the rainbow pegasus.
lol you need to fix this, this changes the whole story good chapter tho
Dude you need to stop calling colts fillies. It's not correct and is demeaning to the male characters
Ok what, is stardust secretly a unicorn? Or does she have a 3rd leg instead of a tunnel?
A 7 year old hacked a supercomputer.....
Khrusallis...... What in the name of all things unholy us a khrusallis?!?
"You keep using that word; I do not think it means what you think it means."
P.s. Colt is the word you want for a young, male pony.
“You can silence me but you can't silence the tru-” He was cut off by the voice setting being muted.
sao abriged lol
This was way to funny.
Celestia is a bitch in here.
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I heard a 7 year old hacked the FBI's main frame, firewall ANNNDDDD everything else.
Ok. So.... He is now a she? Since.... "Filly" and all. also that's four , and now another question. Is SheHe an Alicorn?I
So..... He's a He and a She..... Okay.
Haaaa~ can I have a ' piece '?~
Pfffttttt! Thash worseh!!!!!
Are all boy's girls in this story?.....
Eh-hee~ yes it is~
Jk it was funny!
When ya call him a filly that’s a girl the word your looking for is colt or a foul the pacing is also pretty quick and leave us lost at times but other then these it’s pretty good. Can’t wait for Celestia to figure out that nebula is the same child she tried to impression several years ago.
Fight club vibes
But that's just a theory, A game theory!
Nicely done.
I always got irritated when someone standing next to Celestia started nagging about "Too Dangerous to be allowed to [Fill in the blank].
When really the most dangerous and powerful threat to Equestria is standing right next to him. It really is just a matter of time before something will have to be done about Celestia and the other gods.
Gods, just like people of power all follow the same path. Start out good, or at least not evil, then as time go on, they get more and more prideful, more and more certain that what they believe is best, then they start "Living" the belief that they know better than everyone else. At some point they begin to see others as less competent, less able to make decisions on their own, then they begin seeing others as beneath them. Others become pawns, toys, numbers on a sheet of paper. People stop being living things and become statistics. That's when gods (and the powerful) become evil. They begin playing games with lives, After all, what's a million people, when your world has billions? What does their life matter?
Pride comes before a fall.
Mortals can kill gods.
I firmly believe that this is the inevitable fate for Celestia. She won't be killed by Tirek, or A Changeling Queen, or Grogar. It will be her own ponies.
The Monk
“Not telling you too much about humanity's special power, but I can give you a big hint! It is pure, concentrated spite.” -Knight Breeze
It's nice to see that this story is still going.
Adult Authors have far, far less time on their hands than the teenage Authors here. Never feel bad that you can't do an update every week. Its really not realistic for someone with a job and real world responsibilities. Do what you can, when you can, and you can't go wrong.
Good update and I'm looking forward to more.
The Monk
"Knowledge is power and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil." - Reykan
me when "Skado skadee, he commin’ with me" 🤣
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Loved the twist on the "show". Glad to see you got a chance to do more and upload again.
Nice to see a new chapter for this story. Hope to see another soon!
sky did a dio
*EXHALES SHARPLY*
and they say ponyville's garbage heap grew 6 dresses that day
La historia va demasiado rápido... Las justificaciones para que sea un "Guerrero roto" son extremadamente pobres... Las acciones realizadas por los personajes son un sin sentido... Los sucesos son absurdos... Cómo si ningún personaje tuviera la inteligencia suficiente para hacer bien su trabajo... Una historia carente de todo argumento válido para su progreso... Solo sucediendo porque sí... El como planteas la historia tiene muchos defectos... ¿Cómo rompes una persona hecha un Guerrero que aún no a ido a la guerra matando a una única persona?... El argumento del porque lo hicieron no tiene sentido... Si fuera el caso... La estarían utilizando como una forma de que calme al niño por si se altera... Y en caso de ser necesario amenazar con la muerte de está si se atreve a revelarse... El hecho de que los 5 que dirigen esa instalación estuvieran presentes no posee sentido... ¿Porqué los 5 están ahí?... ¿Qué acaso eso era tan importante como para que los 5 estuvieran presentes?... Además, ¿No pensaron en la posibilidad de que se volviera en contra suya? (Por relativamente poco)... Siguiendo... ¿Cómo dicho incendio se hizo tan grande en tan poco tiempo?... Eso no es posible a menos de que halla mucho material con alta facilidad de inflamabilidad... ¿Que los guardias no podían hacer nada?... ¿Qué no tienen pegasos en sus filas?... ¿No tienen unicornios en sus filas?... Y no solo eso... ¿Celestial? ¿Inútil en esos momentos?... ¿Qué no se supone que es un alicor lo milenaria que siempre mantiene la calma, que es poderosa en la magia y que además VUELA... ¿Cómo con todo eso Celestial no fue capaz de hacer algo?... Además de que la reacción de Otra fue muy simple y la reacción de todos los demás muy exagerada... ¿Cometió el error de saludar con su mano derecha? ¿Porqué? ¿Porqué está hecha de metal?... ¿En base a que determinan que eso es más que suficiente como para catalogarlo como amenaza?... Dejando de lado que el como procedió Celestia está muy fuera de lugar...
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If you could call them dresses.