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Ghost Alvasa


cosplayer/ amateur prop maker and wanna be writer

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A college student who has everything go right in his life going for him. Sure the past few years have been hard with dealing with the disappearance of his oldest brother, later pronounced dead. Then a few months ago his other older brother up and vanished as well. With no current leads, he decides to continue looking for his brother in his spare time while also continuing on the path to becoming an astronomer. On his way home stop at his local comic shop and after buying a set of anime DVDs his oldest brother had recommended he is thrust into an all-new world of magical technicolor anthro ponies.

Featured at number 9 on 03/10/2021

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 187 )

I would love to see where this story goes

This story is amazing keep up the good work

Can he shapeshift into a male zebra I love how the story is going And Zecora seems like a perfect partner for him

Needs a little cleaning up but amazing so far and I am looking forward to the family reunion :scootangel:

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Yes Gar has all of the physical attributes of Gotuo and any normal parasyte. Just like Gotuo and Migi he does require sleep due to the immense amount of strain his large body and physical capabilities put on his mind and the amount of energy he uses.

Interesting. Do more after the storm arc.

Review your chapters before posting, you will find some unfinished words and spelling errors.

Tempest (Fizzlepop) relearns how to do magic from Twilight and Gar teaches her how to defend herself.

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The issue here is that Gar fights using calculations during the fights relying on instinct and his own ability to shape shift at will. He has no formal training at all

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I was thinking of piting Tem against him so she can learn to fight an unpredictable and adaptive foe. She could sharpen her skills fighting something like Gar.

"Oh, I did build this," Pinkie interrupted. "Gar built it. He put the bread in some time ago, said he wanted us to have something for breakfast to go with the tea he made."

Found a mistake it should be

"Oh, I didn’t build this," Pinkie interrupted. "Gar built it. He put the bread in some time ago, said he wanted us to have something for breakfast to go with the tea he made."

"I just don't understand that guy," Spike crossed her arms. "I can get protecting Twi and us the first times cause we're Zecora's friends but then he goes and almost kills himself to fight Tempest and her crew off. Now he's making us breakfast? With rocks?"

And here it should be he not she

Rainbow started to fly up to the roof of the cave to see if she could get a look at who was humming the melody when she knocked her head into a stalagmite that proceeded to break and fall off into the what.

Rainbow started to fly up to the roof of the cave to see if she could get a look at who was humming the melody when she knocked her head into a stalagmite that proceeded to break and fall off into the water.

"Our home, Equestria, was attacked by the Storm King's forces and three of our princess captured for their magic. We were told to seek out the hippogriffs for help," Twilight pleaded. "Can you please take us to them?"

"They are me friends and I am their protector," Gar scowled. "And I said that because we've found the hippogriffs, or more precisely what were the hippogriffs. In this land, I would expect you to have a powerful magic artifact that transformed your whole race into sea-ponies. That is what the Storm King targeted in the first place but after your intense battle with his forces you were all left drained and sacred so you used that very artifact to transform yourselves from hippogriffs to the sea-ponies you are now."

"They are me friends and I am their protector," Gar scowled. "And I said that because we've found the hippogriffs, or more precisely what were the hippogriffs. In this land, I would expect you to have a powerful magic artifact that transformed your whole race into sea-ponies. That is what the Storm King targeted in the first place but after your intense battle with his forces you were all left drained and Scared so you used that very artifact to transform yourselves from hippogriffs to the sea-ponies you are now."

"I understand you want to save your people and your home but do this is not the way to do it," She looked at him in shame. He scowled at her., "We can't just take their magic because we need it, that would make use no better than the one we're trying to fight," He let out a sigh "If I have to be the weapon you need then I will. Now come along, everypony will be wondering where we are."

"I understand you want to save your people and your home but this is not the way to do it," She looked at him in shame. He scowled at her. "We can't just take their magic because we need it, that would make us no better than the one we're trying to fight," He let out a sigh "If I have to be the weapon you need then I will. Now come along, everypony will be wondering where we are."

The swan along and met back up with their friends.

They Swam along and met back up with their friends.

"Does that mean you'll help us?' Twilight swam up wit a hopeful smile.

"Does that mean you'll help us? Twilight swam up with a hopeful smile.

When Grubber locked onto what he saw he fell on his ass in fear. He felt a sudden burning on his cheek, nothing major but back during Canterlot's initial invasion a monster had appeared from the sky and began to cut down the Storm Creatures with ease. In that slaughter one of the monster's bladed tendrils had cut his cheek and whenever he thought of that beast his wound would burn as if it were still fresh.

When I read this I thought he had a cut on his butt cheek and I laughed a little

"How in Equestria are gonna do that?" Applejack motioned with her hands. "The guy is nearly for times our size in this form. He probably weighs more than an Ursa."

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"Well, handle it," He demanded. "Now's your chances to get back my favor. Destroy i and Grubber will be healed post haste." he snickered as he walked off and Tempest bowed.

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"God job Tempest," The Storm King clapped. "Now, onward..."

Good not god

The little man was a little crossed with me for trying to kill Tempest but was willing to move past it after she explained ho w it was me that save him for the most part and how it was i the restored her horn. Speaking of her horn, Tempest was able to use most basic magics with veritable ease, some better than her teacher who was none other than Twilight. Tempest found that she was particularly skilled with flame based magic, especially colorful pyrotechnics similar to fire work. We found out when she and Twilight were practicing one day and nearly blow us all up.

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"I can understand, and I they fixed the usual," I said licking my lips.

Remove the I

Wow the parasite adapted to the demon blood. This is getting good :moustache:

"It is also why Captain Celeano's ship no longer had any rats"

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Tasty.

Can't wait for the fight!!

"Princess Blueblood," Princess acknowledged the stallion. "What brings you to us today?"

lol princess blueblood is that foreshadowing of what gar will do to him one day :D ?

I wonder if there's gonna be a big family reunion where gar meets his brothers and wifes

Is the monster face from an anime, it seems familiar to me but I can’t place it?

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It's what Gar was Displaced as, Gotuo from Parazyte The Maxim in monster form

"Princess Blueblood," Princess acknowledged the stallion. "What brings you to us today?"

"Prince Blueblood," Princess acknowledged the stallion. "What brings you to us today?"

Gar aimed his now rapidly spinning arm and called out, " GIGA DRILL BREAKER! " He shouts as he launched the bulk of his body forward.

I think that line should have been "I do hope that neither of them have hurt each other to much".

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