Humans currently poses an entire intergalactic empire, the aid of their brilliant technologies, and the fundamentals of dark energy have allowed them to succeed to a type three civilisation.
A human named Jack decides to buy a planet called “Harmony” on the intergalactic market. This planet holds residence to dozens of sapient species who all are primitive lifeforms.
He decides to transform into one of the native species, with his intention to cause as much havoc/chaos as possible. At the time of his arrival, most of the world hadn’t seen conflict for well over 1000 years. He plans to change this, by encouraging new ideologies, starting a technological black powder arms race, and ultimately causing wars.
He may look evil to the natives, though according to the intergalactic government, he is implementing nothing illegal. His planet means his rules.
May or may not include Communists
This story is set in Early Season Two, a few episodes after “Return of Harmony”. This is an alternate universe and thus Equestrian girls don't exist, humans are basically just a myth.
Prereader: crimson velvet
Constructive criticism is welcome.
This story is cancelled. I'm currently working on another one, with a similar setting/universe.
Oi. I think him and Discord would have gotten along just swell!
So...he IS evil.
This sounds like what Starbound would use for information on what Earth and humanity before the event, whatever it was (never played as a human) that forced them to leave.
I love it it’s very very interesting I can’t wait to see what he does first
Hmm.... Interesting... You've got my attention.
Looks great!
This seems to be very good
I'd love to see more
Normally I am not too keen with having a TG HiE, but you put in just the right amount of sass to this to make it sound interesting with his/her plans to to reek havoc on this planet starting with the ponies. I wonder how it is going to start out with. I also wonder what Discord was the product of form the advance Human tech that created this world?
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Good luck on your story
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Observation: It has promise.
Heh. Well I guess this isn't a bad start. Might check back in a few chapters.
This looks like an awesome story. Do you know what your chapter upload schedule might look like?
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For the next few weeks, every 2-5 days.
After that, it could stretch to 5-14 days.
Excuse me for my rudeness. What the fuck.
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Exactly how I would describe it.
So far. FUCKING AWSOME. this setting is actually a lot like a boom in
M planning on writing. But ya know. Without ponies.
oh my celestia!!!... i don't care what you do to them just don't anger the inter-universal Lyra club
I hope that jack seceds in his mission. Nobody and nothing should go this long without war. Also I hope sometime you have a whole victor made of his pony form.
So much potential! This is going to be a fun and chaotic story to read, I can already tell. I'm excited to read the next chapter!
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Or to be more specific, he's apathetic and completely lacks empathy. This dude reads like a teenager who lights cats on fire just because he can. It'd be simpler to stomp the cat to death, or drown it, or shoot it, but that wouldn't be as interesting. So instead, he ties a rag to a cat, sets the rag ablaze, and throws them both into a busy street. The whole place might burn down, and the cat will almost certainly die--if not from the flames, then from running under a moving car--and dozens will end up hospitalized or worse, and for no reason at all.
But hey, it's a cool way to kill ten minutes.
some of the controls and currency stuff remind me of EVE online(I currently play the game)
ooh, it's very interesting!
let's see where this goes!
I wonder what she will call herself when predestining herself to the ponies?
More!
FINGERS ARE OVERPOWERED
This can only end in tears..... also looking forward to the grand reveal. I always loved the shock of primitive species when they learn just how insignificant they are.
Quite the story you have here poniesmine, i enjoy the idea behind it because its quite unique. well done!
You men Quadroped?
Morrrrrre, need more.
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I wasn't sure what the symbol was for their currency, so I just picked one that fitted best.
Now THAT is the real question
If atomic had a PhD, they would call her doctor boom.
Go on
Isn't it woman?
Shit is going to hit the fan
... And I thought the mc of overlord, and his minions, were evil
...
So where’s the story?
Lmao I can see where this is going
He's doing a mini snap of only 1% of the population of the world instead of 50% of the universe
I need this story to breathe
Is he going to switch races again? If so I agree totally with being a griffon, and since they are in a civil war if he can somehow become the leader he has his own nation to toy with
Why do I always think of an combination of the major from Hellsing Ultimate and Hellsing Ultimate abridged whenever I read anything involving Atomic?
Oh right...
Hmm interesting
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A perfect representation.
I feel like the only way to get Celestia to change is to back her into a corner where it becomes apparent the old ways aren’t gonna cut it. Imagine if Luna’s elite guard is slaughtered and the Democratic Gryphons won. It’s going to be a harsh blow policially never mind personally, especially if Celestia goes to find this pony. If she comes all high and mighty?..
“Just because you weren’t interested doesn’t mean I can’t go sell to someone else.”
I also like the shock when Celestia meets somepony who doesn’t think that highly of her. All the power for so long would go to your head.
Why all the downvotes? I'm enjoying this story!
Huh, I wasn't sure that the poison could actually kill the princess, I hope this will just be a plan for them to withdraw?