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Wild Wire


I just wanna write what I wanna write when I wanna write it and then never deal with it again.

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What if you had the ability to control time? So much so that you're basically able to do anything? My answer, is make some friends! Now if only everypony wasn't afraid of me.

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9535928
More is on it's way (Hopefully) next Friday!

(Might have lots of OOC because I'm not a good writer.)

Then, why not seek help online?

9536027
Honestly, I don't know, I mostly just write cause it's fun, and I guess I just don't want to be limited, even if it's wrong or something weird like that?

Hmm him helping Changelings,Starlight and others before the events would be interesting.
XD alliance of Changelings, crystal empire, our town and maybe gryphons, diamond dogs and seaponies.

9627488
Honestly, I hope I think of something instead of reaching Zecora as well, because I barely know how to rhyme, nor do I feel like taking forever to figure that out.

I am following this and following you good work

So can he do shortcuts like sans from undertale or it's different?

Will he be able to give and take years of life and making someone ageless?
For example making Celestia age again and let's say making her age very fast.

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I did say he could fast forward time, and we've also discovered he can isolate that. So he COULD theoretically make someone age faster, slower, or even backwards for as long as he's able to hold it. Agelessness though, he can't make something age again, because he can only fast forward it, but the whole point of agelessness is that you NEVER age. EVER. If it doesn't happen, trying to fast forward it wouldn't work. Also sorry if this comment sounds mean in anyway that I don't see, I get a bit aggressive when I explain stuff without realizing it.

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I meant if he can take away immunity to the time flow.

Think about it as if Celestia had running program like in Windows and you can stop it or resume it in taskmanager.

Can he take for example event of body aging of another person and give it to another or do it backwards.?
That should work around being ageless or he can't transfer events of others?

Or maybe it's like virus immunity or barrier and he has to make a physical contact to take away or give it
Shields up! - aging turn off
Shields down! - aging turn on

He should be someway be able to do it but I don't think I can explain that, I don't know many time theories and stuff like that.

Also Celestia could be just aging very slowly. I think in comics they were younger.

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/5/55/Legends_of_Magic_Annual_2018_cover_A.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20180124021637

https://derpibooru.org/1455942?q=idw

https://derpibooru.org/1687197?q=idw%2C+Celestia

And if it's not canon I think Cadenza was younger in some flashback (I think it was on the wedding episode ) .

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Okay, I think I somewhat get what you're trying to ask, but I still don't fully understand it so I'm going to explain something and hope it answers your question.

His current powers are: time flow manipulation, time travel, stealing time or events, and reusing events. He could theoretically steal immortality if that immortality wasn't always there, by stealing the event of them gaining it. But if they ALWAYS had immortality, and WILL always have immortality, then there's no event or time to steal from them, because no matter what, at any point in time, they ALWAYS have/had it. He could possibly GIVE immortality, but that would only last until he's not able to hold it anymore, in which case they'll be vulnerable until he does it again. Maybe the princesses do age, but are still going to live forever or something. In which case, he could possibly speed that up or slow it down, but not enough to the point to death, because that NEVER happens.

(Also I haven't read the comics, so I have no idea what happens there.)

Oh I hope he won't say anything important for example future events or his powers (or at least he will tell them a little bit in a way they won't understand) and if he will slip he will rewind time to tell something different.

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I must know who this ‘Daniel’ person is.
Can’t wait for the next chapter! 😁

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It'll come soon, don't worry!

A true Lord asks not permission!

"ZA WARUDO!" I shout, throwing my arms out and letting it sink in for a brief moment before I actually freeze time. I then walk some distance behind him and unfreeze time again. I fake an evil laugh. He jumps and turns around, before he puts on his most serious expression.

"Dio." He calls intimidatingly

"Jotaro." I say, even trying to do the voice. A brief, menacing pause falls before us.

IS THAT A MOTHA F'ING JO JO REFERENCE, HEEEEEELLLLLLLLL YEAHHHHHH!!!!!

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I was hoping someone would get this! I also put one in a previous chapter if you haven't noticed that one.

Will there be more of his friends coming in the future?
If yes will they represent infinity stones in some way?
We have now time stone and I think mind stone? (Scarlet Witch could levitate stuff and all)

9637622
Vou bem, só lendo um pouco antes de ir para a cama.

9637624
Beleza, ainda espero mais capítulos de suas histórias

9636734
Son a da bitch!!!
I love jojo it's possibly the best anime next dbz and naruto

That entire time stealing thing was taken from JoJo's, wasn't it? I'm on to you.

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It was, yes. Its basically time erase but he can place stuff back in different places.

9662288
Writers block and no laptop at the current moment.

This is what would happen if The World and King Crimson had a love child, if you know what I mean xD :pinkiecrazy:

JoJo references aside, the chapter was interesting, but the MC here seems a bit overpowered. Writing was neat and it was fun to imagine myself as that same character if that's what you were aiming for.

The problem with Overpowered MC's is that they bs everything through. Hopefully, you have a solution for that. Other than that, it's pretty good writing XD

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry::raritycry:This is so good. I need more!!

i can now die happily with that jojo reference at the end.

Whenever he said that you could lag your way through walls the first thing I thought was the main character Gmod style t-posing through it.

ZA WARUDO!! *bass-boosted noises*

"I don't feel physically or mentally tired, but I do believe I still feel mental exhaustion, and that could be a whole 'nother head ache if I don't find a remedy for it." I simply reply.

What's the difference?

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Like, when you're tired, you get loopy and junk, hard to focus, but the other is just like, massive headache and stuff. I guess. Something like that.

I love it can't wait for more I hope it's not on hautis for to long

9678128
Are you shitting me? I'd take those powers in a heartbeat. ;]

Ohhh, the world would hate me because of this one simple trick...

The list said stealing events makes me more powerful, and being more powerful should probably increase the time limits.

Honestly? I'd start throwing cones, rocks and sticks up, then "stealing" them hitting my face, or something. It probably won't do much, but since literally strolling aimlessly through the forest...


If I received this box from my future self, then I will also inevitably become him because it has already happened, so I also am inevitably going to find a box to send back like he did.

Hah. Hardly. You just happen to be the branch that received the box. We have no clue if your predecessor received the box, or if he was the one to come up with it. You might as well just forego sending it - you already received it, you'd be sending it to a different version of yourself.

If I'm thinking right, one of his previous iterations didn't receive the box, and yet lived long enough to come up with the idea. Time doesn't run in loops - you can move the "playhead" along your own timeline, but it'll always have a definite beginning and a definite end (and yes, there will be an end, even if he doesn't age - the Universe itself will end eventually).

Consider: if you go left, walk for 15 minutes, rewind the choice, then go right and walk for 15 minutes... you've been walking for 30 minutes. Subjective, personal time is always moving forward.


“It’s not invisibility, nor is it teleportation, but what it IS, is useful.”

Way to give it up, dude. You basically said what it is without saying it outright. Eliminating the obvious two leaves very little, and makes it clear that it's a very powerful ability at the same time.

Sheesh. People trying to be clever...

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Mental exhaustion is, in reality, your brain being physically tired (ie. running out of neurotransmitters, junk accumulating around the cells, that sort of thing). If he doesn't get tired at all, mental exhaustion should be a non-issue. Now, this shouldn't be confused with getting sleepy - the feeling of needing to sleep is a separate mechanism, one purposefully engaged by the brain, to force you to rest (as in, it's not "automatic" - there's a number of people who have suffered brain damage and through it, lost the mechanism altogether).

I could see headaches, but only as an after-effect of, say, exhausting his time-altering energy. In fact, I wouldn't be suprised if he'd actually get tired if he spent too much of that - but not because of physical fatigue per se, but rather because it'd slowly reintroduce the effects of physical fatigue (as the energy leaves him and is spent, it stops holding "natural" exhaustion at bay).

So what I'm basically saying is that "mental exhaustion" and his particular brand of invincibility do not go well together. Physical exhaustion either affects him in its full scale (if not intensity), or it doesn't affect him at all (so no headaches due to being mentally exhausted). Unless, of course, the power specifically doesn't affect his brain for whatever plot-warranted reason... which would do a number on his body, though, not to mention the fact that he wouldn't be effectively immortal, either.

"ZA WARUDO!" I shout, throwing my arms out and letting it sink in for a brief moment before I actually freeze time.

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9758220
To be honest, who wouldn't take those powers if given to them?

Think of all the things you could do with Time Manipulation :trixieshiftleft: :trixieshiftright:

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