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An Intricate Disguise
Selling out has never felt so dirty.
An Intricate Disguise
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Very nice, another well-made story! Yet, I am eager about them doing it virginal.
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*Vaginal
And I have to agree. Butt stuff isn't the only thing in the world, Intricate.
I approve of this collection of stories with the fetish focus you've got going with your commissioner.
For mister Commissioner: I'd love to read more about these two friends sharing Jeremy in the future, though.
I can't thumbs u or thumbs down this. I mean, they're like fucking whores, for Christ sake. I get this is a real fetish, but, may I add, that this is about the same description of what I could only imagine a porn hub video? I mean, sure go into detail all you want. I don't give a damn. I feel dirty reading this though. I try not to think about it. I know that this is your style, and I absolutely respect that. I don't want to know why you went into such detail. I mean, the mental capacity and the lack of humility to write this is beyond God's forgiveness (no, I'm not a devout Christian, but this is... demonic. In a sense.) A thousand fetish tags slapped on this, right on the damned ass, may I add. If the rating went from "Everybody" to "Pervert Heaven" then it woul be far past the latter. I feel bad for the people who have to approve this. Almost scarring. I sound like a fucking wimp. However... the way you protrayed this worked well. In your favor. I won't read this ever again, for my sake entirely, but it was a good story. Again, you really didn't need the whole damn detail section of how both he/she got fucked. Or maybe you did. The whole part of it did/didn't fit correctly (that's what she said.) It did and didn't. I can't (dis)approve, but I can say you got a real good mind. May I suggest you put your details to the test and write something that doesn't an incredulous amount of fetish? I mean, just a thought. Or, you know, just go ahead and delete this. I support and don't. It's by far grammatically correct, from what I could tell. I like that, but not... how much of a slut three they are? You literally said they fucked only four times a day. Only four. How much can that poor Jeremy's dick take, much less his practical prostitute girlfriends' ass? I need to stop. Writing. Now. Go and write more, others like it. Mental note, even though my brain literally just imploded, to not read anything like this again.
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I agree. Needs more Spike.
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Fucking what
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Dude. I almost had to laugh at that. Seriously.
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You need more Spike to laugh?
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... You okay?
I think "human" tag missing.
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Thanks for pointing this out!
“El Precioso Flor,” Jeremy butted in. Honestly, her Spanish was terrible.
Only nitpick I have, is that the right translation would be "La preciosa flor"
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Guess I take after Minuette! I'll fix that shortly, thanks.
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*clears throat* Nope
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I haven’t even read the story yet, and I’ve already given it a like, just because I know the author and like his work, and because it apparently triggered you. Seriously, if you disapprove so vehemently, then just leave. Don’t spout off about how “Demonic” it is. I can only assume from your comment and others that this is filled with graphically descriptive scenes of constant anal sex between multiple partners.
And?
What’s demonic about that? Just because you don’t agree with it, doesn’t make it evil. Also, you have a lot of nerve commenting on how grammatically correct the story was, seeing as your sentence structure seems to be all over place.
The funny thing is, I think you’re even aware of the fact that it doesn’t matter what you think, and yet you went ahead and posted this long, drawn out, rambling ode to . . . what exactly is the point you’re trying to make, anyway? You call it “Demonic”, insist that they’re all “Whores”, while also being sure to point out that you’re not a devout Christian (which is something I honestly have a hard time believing, frankly), only to then go on to say that while you can’t approve of it, you can’t disapprove, either? What?! Make up your mind, man! It sure as hell sounds like you disapprove, and strongly!
If you don’t like it, then don’t like it. And, hell, you’re even free to say you don’t like it. But, honestly, if you’re not interested in fetish porn, then why even click on a story with the porn tag, a sequel to a pair of stories both involving anal, written by an author who is KNOWN for being so raunchy that he’s been suspended from this site on more than one occasion? Why? Simply so you could leave this drawn out, rambling comment about how much you disapprove, and thus garner all that sweet, sweet internet attention?
Well, here ya go, you got your fifteen minutes of shame, or more like 20+ dislikes. Now, toddle on back to your preferred stories, and leave us to ours, the way it should have been, from the beginning. Thank you.
Oh, and look, I made a long, drawn out, rambling comment about how much I disapprove of something, too! Come on, then, internet, shower me with your thick, creamy attention! REEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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Dude, you're reading a story about a guy fucking cartoon horses. Any argument you trying to make about it being demonic or antichristian is automatically invalid
wait howd ddid i get here
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Because they are whiny lil' perverts who pretend to be Christians while imposing their views on others. That's why.
Oh, and I am a Christian too, but at least I'm honest about it. The whiny guy deserves the thumbs-down.
Seriously, they self-inflict the horse-words porn by reading them, only to then complain about it?
I'd say I lost hope for people, but that implies I had any from the start.
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And I was being rhetorical too - the fact that I commented before you posted your own comment should've told you that.
I am not picky. 'nuff said.
And I won't be imposing any viewpoint on ya, so stop being so touchy.
Something tells me that he is soon going to be introduce to the concept of a herd
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Jesus, did you have a fucking stroke.
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Le gasp! I am dishonored for failing to grasp a misunderstood humorous response!
I must commit seppuku at once!
And I will avail to the use of emojis to my heart content to make clear just how serious - or not - I am being, and as for you wanting to be as touchy as you want...
Good for you.
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That's right! I must not forget the Cthulhu statue I got hanging around as well to add to the sacrifice! 
Gee whiz, mister Iorii!
Thanks for all of the help!
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Because, y'know. Us heathens don't know that the only acceptable kind of sexual content is post-marital sex between a man and wife in the missionary position. Why would any other kind of desire or feeling come into it. Lust is a sin after all, and blahblahblah unrealistic expectations of the human condition blahblah
It's almost like these people don't really get the idea that porn is tongue-in-cheek (pun gloriously intended) and isn't supposed to represent real life, and is instead a delivery vehicle for the sexytimes to happen in a larger-than-life (sure, let's have another innuendo) way.
Fucking enough is enough. I know I was tripped or something and drooled on my keyboard on my previous comment. Seriously. So, as an apology to the following:
To the author. Hell, I don't know why I commented that. Honestly, this is beyond what I could write in my lifetime. Without a second doubt, nor the fact that my... previous comment was poorly worded and that you all hate it. No, it's because I've felt bad for this poor author and the amount of comment thread spam. I've been contemplating, formulating this for a couple days now.
To everyone else who's replied. I've wasted your time more than I have mine. I wish I could do something about it, really. I was being a damn spaz when I typed up my previous comment, was impulsive beyong forgiveness. Still now.
And, with closure, do not reply, comment extra, or do anything remote to what has just been listed previously. I beg of you on behalf of the author, who, I'm almost sure, hates this thread as much as I. Ashamed, defeated, I walk away. I cannot fix whatever I did. But I can throw a couple boards and nails over it.
And
Naturally, Humans... Always the innocent ones... Pfff sure
In other news; Celestia banished Twilight... To the sun!
This poor oc... Has to suffer those mares.
Yes, yes it is
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Damn good man.
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rile
Did you mean to call his hair a mane, or is that just some analogy or something?
remove the dangling quote
cue
Uh... If she clambered BETWEEN the two of them she should be in the middle, not on one side...
I'm glad to see both Auburn and Minnie return.
I know this isn't your thing, but I would really like to see the relationship between Minnie and Jeremy develop. The hot sex is fantastic but here and there you show a bit of character development. The fact that Minnie was hesitant to approach Auburn is intriguing. It's like you're cock teasing us with actual plot!
Anyway, I enjoy seeing updates from you.
Thank you for posting.
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Both of you take after dear Minty, lol. In romance languages, it's usually [article] <noun> <adjectives>, so the correct format is La Flor Preciosa. However, hotel is masculine, so it may be called El Hotel de la Flor Preciosa
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You can swap the Order of noun and adjective in Spanish and no one will look at you twice, but there is something weird about the adjective "preciosa" that I can't figure out...
Need more, someone commission him I’m broke lmao.
Dang it. Too often do good series go down the dreaded path of threesomes/herding.
I'm sure it's well written and interesting but I gotta stick to what I like, ya know?
Looking forward to another installment, also you called Jeremy "jason" around 30 paragraphs from the bottom. Still keep up the fun series.
Nvm that comment I type
. This is a wonderful story! Keep up the great work!
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ALREADY SAW THE FIRST ONE NO SWAPSIES
but no I appreciate it very much. See you bookmarking a lot of my stuff lately, nice to feel appreciated!
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And I'm glad you don't mind the bookmarking. I do that to put everything in order. Your stories are really fun to read!
Yeah, my apologies. I didn't realize that oc was the oc in Off Duty, On Private. I usually would dive straight into the story without reading the info, because I'm excited to read a good story! I feel silly not doing that
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You flatter me a ton. no worries whatsoever about the comment, no offense was taken! But no, it's great seeing those stories get bookmarked! Nice to see someone genuinely enjoying my work, keep on smuttin'!
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Will do Captain Spitfire!
Will there be a sequel to this story? I enjoy the relationship between Jeremy and Minuette.
who the fuck is Jason and when did he get into this story? :P
Damn, these two are just beyond cute together. And pretty fucking hot, too. This whole series of yours has been quite enjoyable. Did I mention hot?
I can't help but find quite a bit of comic absurdity with Auburn being stationed in Syria, given how nightmarish that ended up being! Like I get that the poners wanna help us with our wars like the cuties they are, but unless those magic shields can block bullets, I can't imagine that going well at all! We'd probably traumatize the poor things for life!
Kinda not expecting anyPONY being in Syria, but cool I guess 🗿