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During Anon A Miss, Sunset doesn't think she has anyone on her side anymore. But at the Sweet Shoppe, she gets help from the Cakes. Especially when her 'friends' decide to confront her.

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An excellent reworking of the story. Earn a favourite.

O.O well, that happened. But I love it!

Yup this is going on my favorites I always loved the cakes as characters!:pinkiehappy:

An Anon-A-Miss story portraying adults that actually do something is always a win in my book

Will there be a sequel? Love to see the aftermath of the truth coming out, and how the rest of the adults react to how the five girls reacted and what they did.
See them drag them by the ears or arms to apologize to Sunset, the CMC dragged by the ears for sure.

Make. A . Sequel. Now:ajbemused:

9236883>>9236897 Third!:pinkiehappy:

Grammar's a little choppy, but other than that this could easily branch out into a much bigger story.

Rainbow is lucky that she’s not getting charged for battery for what she did to Sunset unless getting your own milkshake poured on you doesn’t count for battery.

short... but i like it.

While I think the Humane 5's actions here are a bit out there, I can definitely appreciate how Mr. and Mrs. Cake handled the situation. The world needs more adults like these two!

Short but very sweet. Praise to the cakes for their kindness

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No it does.
Any aggressive contact towards another is considered battery. Assault as well if it's intentional.

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In that case, Rainbow definitely IS lucky that the cakes merely decided to ban her from SugarCube Corner instead of calling the police. You think Rainbow’s friends are going to be pissed at her for getting them in trouble like that. Besides it’s not like Rainbow really has much of a defense for her actions

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It's almost as bad as the Case of Casey Anthony. That bitch.

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It was more like a combo of Rainbow's inexcusable actions and the others harassing Sunset that got them in trouble so they aren't without fault. The Cakes did tell her their shop was a safe haven for her.
And they're all lucky the police didn't get involved, harrassment is a crime too. An extremely small one but still.

this is awesome I remember I've had gotten an idea that was almost the same but it was about the main six being so terrible to sunset in public place that they ended up in trouble with the adults like losing a job or bans and its there faults for trying to bully her like give her a hard time or run her off for being in places they considered "theirs" that it has the adults step in to tell someone off.

Huh I should add that to my story.
Great story but it's too short if you ask me. I'd like to see a follow up to this or something.

Pinkie is lucky she wasn’t fired on the spot

Comment posted by Crack-Fic Kai deleted Oct 18th, 2018

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That's right Pinkie does work for them doesn't she? I'd forgotten all about that. You're right she is lucky.
Seems the luck was on all their sides that day.

Honestly I have to say it's refreshing to read a fic where adults are stepping in to do the right thing as opposed to falling into the hate like sheep.

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not sure if human Pinkie does in canon

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Fair enough, they're still lucky though

Needs some editing but I still liked it.:twilightsmile:

That was satisfying. It's like seeing my own Anon-a-miss idea in the flesh (or text, as it were). Also, despite how others portray the population in reaction to the cyber-bullying, it's more realistic when it's shown that there are still good people who do help, just like the cakes. I imagine Maud being on that list.

Anyone else you guys can think of?

Sheesh lucky it wasn't me. I'd have decked Rainbow for that stunt.

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I've seen Mr. Doodle a few times. He tends to stay clear headed.

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That serpent Steven Magnet would also probably count.

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He'd probably be like a drama class teacher or something but it's possible

admittedly not what i was hoping for when i read it but a good story none the less.

i was hoping this would be the cakes calling AJ's line about sunset not being welcome at the sweet shop in the comic out because honestly none of the humane 5 own the sweet shop so really that made no sense.

good story none the less.

It's been awhile since I've read an Anon-a-miss fic where the adults are friendly to Sunset.

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Also, remember that there's the criminal charges of Assault/battery, and the civil tort of battery. Given this situation, since they aren't real people involved in a real case, I can say Sunset would have both actions available to her. Of course, this is just a guess, and I would need to know her jurisdiction in order to build either case. I am a paralegal, and can't give advice on real cases, so this is good practice. :twilightsheepish:

Getting a police officer involved would bring the proper attention to Anon-A-Miss, because the officer is going to ask Rainbow Dash why she did it. Dash doesn't strike me as having enough mouth-brain filter to invoke her attorney rights there, and one of the first things that would happen is Dash would be separated from the others as part of the questioning process. The second thing to happen is gonna be Dash justifying her action due to Anon-A-Miss. Even the Keystone Kops or other comedic cop characters (Clouseau, anyone?) could probably figure out that Sunset's being set up. Heaven help the CMC if someone competent investigates the case impartially. In order for the Rainbooms to get their heads out of their (phrasing!) and realize what sort of idiots they really are, we can't have even an incompetent cop respond to this. Yet. :trollestia:

Ok, I am rambling, clearly blaming it on the coffee. :ajsmug:

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According to the shorts, Pinkie works in a 50's diner at the mall, while the Cakes have their own shop on a street corner.

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:pinkiegasp:IalwayshavecoffeeinfactIneverrunoutandIknowIcanstopatanytimebutIdon'twannabecasuecoffee!:pinkiehappy:

:pinkiesmile: Want some?

Also, I like this story. Have a yay!
:yay:

9247833
I have an imaginary teleported setup. Will that do?

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Yup. Incoming coffee!:pinkiehappy:

The only worthwhile one you've posted as far as I'm concerned.

OK, who imagines Pinkie Pie coming to apologize but then Mr and Mrs. Cake tells her that they're not the ones she should be apologizing too. Also, they tell her, just because Sunset is allegedly causing trouble, it's no reason to become a bully. Pinkie insists she isn't, but Mrs. Cake says that she did nothing at all, so she pretty much supports what Rainbow Dash did. Also, Pinkie loses her babysitting priveleges.

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It'd make a great scene in a sequel for sure.
(maybe just a temporary ban of babysitting privileges though):pinkiesad2:

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I mean Mr and Mrs. Cake would say that treating Sunset like that makes them bullies and they don't want their kids to have any bad influences.

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Hence the temporary ban. At least until the Cakes deem her no longer a bad influence.

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I wonder if that would be bad for the diner's business, I mean if I saw that and one of the girls who didn't stop her worked at a place that I go to, I would refuse to be served by a friend of a bully

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