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What if during a chance encounter, Tempest had met Twilight after leaving her village?

What if there was a way for her to attend Celestia's school anyway?

Oneshot Drabble.

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Honestly, it's cute I admit, but I think this could benefit from being more than just a one-shot. You could easily have gotten a multi-chapter story out of this idea.

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Anyone is welcome to write a continuation

Not bad. I caught a few typos here ("nothing for her there" and "when I encountered a beast"), but it's a sound idea. Wish it had been a bit longer, though I did get a kick out of Tempest / Fizzlepop's name being blown at the end, that was clever XD

would this be the universe of the storm?
where is she the element of magic?
(twinlight can be loyalty)

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