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The Storm King136 stories ·167 members

The Princess' Right-hand Mare

(Regency Au)
The Storm King's becoming more tyrannical and more adamant on taking over Equestria. So Princess Twilight Sparkle must make the biggest sacrifice of her life, become his fiancé so the other princesses can have more time to think of a plan to take him down.

But hey, maybe it's not all bad! Her body guard, once the captain of the Storm King's army and his right hand mare, is pretty cute.

(WARNING: Prologue is kinda, depressing, I promise it'll lighten up a bit tho!!)

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Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #1 · Oct 8th, 2022 · · 1 ·

Shouldn't this have the AU tag? Just saying it in the description isn't enough.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #2 · Oct 8th, 2022 · · ·

Her brother and step-sister, Starlight, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, her young students, Zecora, Big Mac, Trixie, Sunset Shimmer, Discord, Thorax, Bon Bon, Lyra, Vinyl Scratch everyone. They couldn’t do anything but cry, or look longingly at the ground.

Woah! Everyone is here to say goodbye to her? ( You forgot to put her parents. And is "step-sister = Cadence? And her "young students" = Young Six? )

Wait a second!? If Discord, Sunset, and Starlight is here, why didn't they just solve this problem themselves? Or why didn't the Young Six ask their own kingdom leaders to be beneficial allies in this war? The Storm King CAN'T fight multiple kingdoms and various allied species ganging up on him.

I doubt they will just give up Twilight like that. This can't be the "only" solution here?

Unless you made Storm King too OP or immune to their power from some reason? Or they are too chicken to fight him personally?

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