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Daemon McRae


The magic comedy hoers.

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Once, during a brief conversation between Luna, Celestia, and Discord, the Spirit of Chaos lets slip a piece of information that neither he nor Luna could possibly know, having been imprisoned for a thousand years. Upon further interrogation, Luna confesses that neither she nor Discord were truly imprisoned for the millenium they were absent.

They resided in Tirelic, a parallel world where the night never ends, where abominations of terrible origin and conspicuous means make trade and commerce, and where everything is more than it ever could have been anywhere else. A land where beasts and ponies, gods and mortals, and everything in between made their homes, their lives, and their living in the place that should be impossible in the plane of existence that is improbable.

The world where Tirek won. The world where he still rules.

And where he's been waiting for Celestia for over a thousand years.

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An old collab with RainbowBob, including original Author's notes/commentary. We never finished it, so it's posting as complete because that's all there is! I tried finding it recently and it had disappeared everywhere! Except, of course, my cloud drive. Heehee.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

Reasonably baller first chapter.

I'm getting more scaled down Throne from K6BD vibes here

Not well, apparently. Well, at least this saves me the trouble of explaining my double-cross with Tirek and the most likely reason Celestia was missing in the first place.

An ending of all time.

Story plot: 10/10 (Glorious)
Humor: 100/10 (it's a very VERY difficult challenge trying not to laugh out loud or crack a smile while reading this in class instead of taking notes or actually listening)
Luna: 1000/10 (cause Luna is best Princess and you wrote her beautifully)
Discord: 9999/10 (Cause Luna is still better but you wrote Discord fantastically as well)
Celestia: 500/10 (Luna and Discord's interactions with her carry her rating up from a 9/10, but Celestia was fun to read too.)
Story completion: 2/10 (Why, WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE INCOMPLETE?!?!?!?! Still gets 2 instead of zero because what we have is "hot-damn" good and just pure comedy gold ❤️❤️❤️)

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