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An Intricate Disguise


Selling out has never felt so dirty.

Comments ( 36 )

This has earned the twilight sparkle approval!

loved the read, it was quite well wrote and I wouldn't mind reading any other works you produce.

It's porn, what did you expect? A plot? Take the upvote already.

She's thinking of a dragon.

And here I was lamenting how there was so few good Zecora clopfics.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Pony porn ! TFBT.

9134217
well it has plot

9134598
Im sorry, what is TFBT?

there's a safe for work edit of the cover art btw 834204

That was exactly what the witch doctor ordered👍

I have succumbed reading pony porn. What in the world has my life become?

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Last step was grabbing the vinegar from earlier and beginning to peel it, one layer at a time.

How tf you peeling vinegar?

her eyes only focussed on

focused

9135509
Nono I meant ginger fuckkk.

Also focussed is British spelling so bleh.

9135514
Yeah, I was just making a joke on the vinegar one, but I actually didn't know "focussed" at all. TIL, thanks man.

9135487 Mine. You can take it, I don't want it anymore.

Ok, I really hope this story does that artwork justice because holy shit that's a beautiful stripe horse

With descriptions and characterization like that, it certainly was. Also the clop was nice.

Dan

Yeah, Cora-chan is a mare who needs more attention from the town stallions and romance/clopfic writers.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/60075/the-poison-of-passion
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/69904/black-and-white-and-red-all-over
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/126833/loneliness-lost

But she shouldn't feel like she needs to give herself a magical makeover to get a guy. Be yourself, filly!

9134991
"The Featured Box Troll" I pissed off some pony porn writer and he and or she called me that. I like it so now I comment on all pony porn that's in the featured box. Don't get me wrong I like pony porn. But seeing pony porn writers and their fanboi's go ape shit over me just saying "pony porn" in the comments makes me smile. You on the other hoof did not. I am impressed. I may or may not read some of your stories.

9136771
Never experienced you on any of my stories.

9136966
How many in the featured box?

9136967
Don't worry I ant fuck him/her to bad.

9136967
Don't worry I ant fuck him/her to bad.

9136771
I've only written one porn story, but go for it if ya want

9137197
Was it in the featured box?

Comment posted by Fracturedheart deleted Aug 28th, 2018

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Probably for the best, as he'll shit post all over your story comments, then downvote all of them out of spite when you block him for being an edgy little troll.

Also, nice choice of cover art, Intricate. Zecora definitely looks better with a long mane.

9137173
All of them. Hell I have had 4 of them in the feature box at the same time. Use to annoy the shit out of people back when people gave two fucks about the feature box.

9136967
Ready for round two all ready you dirty girl.

9141937
then I am sure I made a smartass comment on them too.

Could you make a sequel to this? I thought the story was awesome

the only thing that could make this better would be a sequel with big mac tbh. fantastic job

I wonder if Zecora was punished with a ginger when she was a foal.

9135514
BTW, as of the time this comment was written, it still says vinegar.

It's been over two years, but it still says vinegar instead of ginger.

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