• Member Since 22nd Nov, 2012
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AgentSnail


I don't want to give out information here... Because obviously you're all going to use it against me. It's alright, I live in a cardboard box and I move it around a lot, so you'll never be able to.

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Caramel's back was shaking, and he couldn't get it to stop.

Suddenly, Caramel :pinkiegasp:

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Well…okay. Not sure how that got in there.

How does this not have more upvotes? This was a great story, man, and I really like the picture you paint of these characters.:raritystarry:

This turned out well. Sort of unusual, but quite good. I still have no idea how you manage to add this much depth and detail to oneshot clopfics.

All the tease-play and eventual love-making are well done in this story. Carrot Cake is one lucky sonofabitch! :twilightblush:

I liked ecverything but he idea tht he had other lovers before her.

This is one of the very few stories here that honestly deserves both the romance and sex tags. Plus it's a nice story about the Cakes. This is just all kinds of great. Have an upvote and a follow. Thinking about writing anymore stories about these two?

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I might. At some point I probably will. These are my light hearted, fluffy things I write when I'm either bored or need a break from the other stories I write, so I assume that there'll be another one. It'll probably have to be based around a new set of events though, which I'll have to come up with. This just seemed a logical continuation of the first story, which everyone seemed to like well enough anyway.

I'm really glad you liked this story, though. I tried to make it actually seem romantic, because I can't stand clop without a relationship of some sort involved. It just seems mindless, and I'm glad that it came out as what I tried to make it.

5737166 I wish I could up vote it more than once. Also I understand what you mean, the mindless motions of automatons doesn't do anything for me. There has to be a spark of passion there, which is still hard to find. I think you did a good job and would love to see a continuation sometime, even if it's some sort of time skip when the kids have left the house or the like. I guess stories about happy married couples are rare on this site because the fandom is largely made up of single, never-married, young men. Of course the media tends to play marriage as an end to real romance anyways. I'm beginning to ramble. Suffice it to say that this Slice of the Cakes was very deliciously moist, sweet but a bit tangy like salted caramel. I put it on my... well... "special favorite" shelf. I'm following you now so hopefully when you do come up with something it'll alert me. I've had some problems with the system before though so I'll check back from time to time. All that said, is there something your fans could do to help the process along? If it's a matter of pre-reading or editing I'm a grader at University so I'm familiar with such issues. Otherwise please know that you've made another fan and that I look forward to your works.

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Thanks for all the praise. And to what you can do, this is a pretty good representation of it. I'm glad someone has interest in another chapter, and it definitely makes it more important in my mind, not that I seem to have a lot of time for writing anymore. That's the real issue, because if I had more time, I would have probably made a third part already at some point.

But either way, I'd like to write another part to this. I'm just not sure when it'll actually get written, and I'm sorry about that. I've probably pissed off a lot of people by uploading sporadically.

I'll try to at the very least get the ideas flowing. You'll get your third part at some point.

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