I like reading, writing and drawing, although I'm not the best at writing these stories. The dragon is my favorite creature. I'm apparently a rabbit because of the year I was born. Wish I was Dragon..
As Fluttershy is obviously too shy to seek a kiss from her very special somepony through social cues, she decides that a game of spin the bottle will surely work. However, the unexpected setbacks seem to wish for her failure.
**Based off of a video on YouTube by Sniper Melon! Go watch!
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This is the video! :) Enjoy! ~
1. Love the story.
2. I had seen that vid a while ago (about last year) but never thought someone would make a story about it... I'm pleasantly surprised!
3. Love the profile pic! I love it when cats make funny faces!
4. I wish I was a born in the month of the dragon too... But instead I'm a tiger.
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1. Thanks!
2. Fabulous
3. That's my cat, Mimi, when she was a kitten~
4. Ugh yeah. Friggin bunnies. XD
I like this ship. I'm not going to go down with it, I prefer
myself, but this is not far behind.
You spelled Cheerilee wrong, maybe I did too, but how can you expect her not to stalk him. She's as gay as the day is long, except for Big Mac. She likes her Big Mac with extra sausage and smooth sausage gravy.
You weren't going to have Big Mac smoke weed? You actually have a concision don't you? I have a little something planned where Celestia is chillin' on the couch, Twilight, Luna and Cadance walk in to see her singing Miley Cyrus, smoking weed and offering it to them.
"With no prevail" doesn't make sense. That is saying "With no succeed"
4796860 That was the only real issue I found, and I quite enjoyed the story. I wouldn't read 300+ pages of it, but in short bursts it is quite enjoyable. Sturdy 3.5/5
4th wall?
Who needs it?
*Ponyshrug*
Enjoyed reading this. Nice idea and a good challenge coming up with a story from the madness that are GMOD shorts.
In case you care for edits I believe I found an error roughly in the middle with "and" instead of "an":
"She drew and arrow on each paper in red marker"
THIS IS AWESOME!
7030747 Oh hello! Thank you for the feedback, I should probably go through and edit this entire gremlin of a story. It's pretty oooold haha.
When I was rereading it just now to reminisce about how bad I was (Though, I'm still not great...) I pretty much would agree with everything you just said. Also, I was surprised at how recent this comment was when I found it - all the others I have on all my stories are like... over a hundred weeks old, each. I might re-vamp this thing, or just edit out some of the worst cringy parts. But heeeeey if you're interested, I'm working on some other stuff now
Stiiiiill probably not very good, but hey, I'm no professional. :P