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Vansho-Lakon


Rookie author and Also a fiend for Caffeine

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AU of the events of Silent Night by

cerealkiller78

Rescued by Sasuke and Naruto from the abandoned factory. A new beginning starts for Sunset Shimmer as she transfers to Hidden Leaf Academy. Making new friends and encountering three familiar faces as well. Sunset soon learns the HLA is twice as wild when comes to magical misadventure then anything she dealt with at CHS. from mad cultist to twisted scientists good thing Sunset's new friends are armed with kickass powers.

Rated T-16 for Violence, Language, and crude humor

Proofreading by MorpheustheDream

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 150 )

Hmmm explains the super pwoers and abitlies. And do liek it that Saskue brother is a cop and so is mom so they are still alive. Do liekt he idea will keep track of it.

I'm interested, but fix up the spelling.

Interesting idea, no too terrible in the grammar and spelling department. I believe that I shall track this and see what happens next.

Interesting (albeit unoriginal premise). You've got my attention.

However, you need to work on grammar and your pacing a bit.

I woulda thought the Ramen Shop Guy and his Daughter would be in charge of the Cafeteria considering they are the most common providers of food in the series

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I was gonna do that, but I decided to do something a bit different.

Mizuki as in the guy from the first episode that hates Naruto. Well played

nice work. looking forward to the next chapter.:yay::twilightsmile:

I can't for the life of me imagine Iruka as a janitor. But a certain super pervert using the position as a cover for witnessing high school drama as inspiration for his popular books...

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Oh my gosh that's brilliant! :pinkiegasp:
Why didn't I think of that!?
thank you

So what its an AU where the Elemental Nation's is a part of their world?

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You're welcome. I'm happy to help.

bit rushed in places, the grammar needs a bit of work, but honestly its very intriguing, Im gonna give this a fav too see where this goes.

Wow dude! I’m not really a fan of Naruto, but I must say that your good with words.

I just thought of something. How about Orochimaru as a Chemistry or Biology Teacher?

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In all honesty, I see Orochimaru as being more of a Chemistry teacher than a Biology teacher. Especially with all of those experiments he does.

So is Sonata Narutos girlfriend? I woyld like to think the other reachers are the tean senseis plus yamato, iruka and orochimaru.

I hope Aria is ok.

I hope Sunset can sue the people who thrashed her apartment and the school.

Also will Twilight Confront Princess Celestia for her failure as a mother?

Well written so far. The okama at the end gave me a laugh. C=

Itachi being a cop prolly carries over from his time as a former ANBU.

I like how everyone in the Naruto cast are written, especially in 21st-ish century Canterlot City. Not surprised that Might Guy’s a gym teacher, but dang he still makes me shiver with that getup of his.

Heh love it. but when are the CMC going to get exposed? I can't wait to see the three of the Rainboom's reactions.

I’d like to Ibuki and Sarutobi’s analogues here in Konoha County.

Ooh, I just realized something. Now Minato and Kushina have kids that take after ‘em. :D

HAH! Deidra was in charge of the art class.

i can't be the only one who really really wanted to eat the curry of life after seeing it

So it been exposed finally!

"WHAT!?" the four girls said in unison.

Four? Who missing suppose to be five. Rainbow, fluttershy, Apple Jack, Rarity and Pinkie.

"I can't say I blame, her given what happened. If Trixie was in her boots, Trixie would do the same." 'Trixie might even do the same, given how toxic things have become here,' She said to herself walking away from the four stunned girls.

Can't blame her. Things gotten pretty bad and will be worst when the truth if revealed.

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You'll find out why there's 4 in the next chapter.

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: that was good work and verey funny for the end.:twilightsmile:

If I had to guess, with Anon-a-miss revealed and the warehouse attackers known, thanks to Mizuki spilling the beans to protect his own scaly hide, RD is having an interesting conversation with the cops about her part in setting up the attempted murder of a supposed friend.

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I love spicy food but don't usually like the flavour of most curry so seeing the curry of life was torture for me lol.

Why did you removed Deidara as the teacher. Havung him there would be amazing.

Skystar is in love with Naruto. Wasn't expecting that.

Please dont have the evil entity be Madara. Him being the scape goat villain is over used. It would have better if he us either Sasuke or Narutos (yes Naruto) grumpy grandfather.

Ps:
Have Kiba go to Chs.

NO ONE ASKED YOU HERE GRUBBER! :flutterrage:

And by the way... yeah you do owe Tempest money. :ajsmug:

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it's Rainbow Dash who's missing isn't it?

I read the story it's based off on and I have a feeling I know why

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it was kinda obvious

also was that dark presence the Ten Tails/Kaguya

They say on that day Equestria had a gained second sun.

I'm curious as to what the full potential of Naruto and Sasuke's powers are.

I always wanted to try that curry. I hope its lam, I like lam curry.

:rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile: nice work looking forward to the next chapter,.

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