Sunset Shimmer is a die hard game nerd, and she just bought the most advanced game system ever made, The Virtual Reality Headgear, the system that allows full emersion into a huge Virtual World. However, once she enters the world of the first game released for the VRH, Sword Art Online, she soon learns that she along with thousands of other players have been trapped inside the virtual world by the games creator.
Now Sunset along with her new friends, must fight to survive and find a way to escape this virtual prison.
If you die in this game, you don't get a second chance!
Co authored by Mad Page AKA Madforce Entertainment
Chapters (3)
Off to a very good start, I really like this socially awkward gamer version of Sunset, her claiming to be a guy to get those perves off her back was hilarious, and finally her breakdown at the end of chapter saying how it's just a game felt so real.
Basically what I'm saying is you got humor, characters, and drama and I can't wait to see more of this
SAO huh? I guess this means Sunset is going to let hundreds of people die because she’s a sociopath?
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I’m glad you liked it this was actually the fist story I tried to submit but it got rejected three times. It took months, and a few edits, but I’m So pleased to finally get this out there, and know that people are enjoying it. I’m not sure when the next update will be. Me and Mad Page have a lot of stories we want to write or we’re already working on, but do keep an eye out.
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it got rejected 3 times how does that work? sorry im relatively new to the site and fandom so i don't know how this site works for stories.
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I understand and am happy to wait for the next chapter (and potentially read some of the other stuff your working on while I wait)
You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention!
I honestly enjoyed both SAO 1 and 2, so I'm interested to see how this goes!
Okay... let's see..
Sunset is a main character or THE main character: check
Involves one of my favorite animes: Check
Is something I've tried hundreds of times but couldn't quite figure out: check
Rating: OwO
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SAO Abridged fan?
will you ever continue this amazing story?
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We will eventually, we’re just busy writing our other stories at the moment.
Holy throne...
Some minor constructive criticism:
You sometimes mess up the words your and you’re and I saw at one point you messed up they’re and their.
Other than that was a pretty good chapter
He's not worhy of the name.
Asberger or no, he knows what he did.
When will she get the
lightsaberphoton blade?10394695
Since this is Aincrad arc I say either not in a foreseeable future or never.
GAAAARY!!!! 'scuse me I gotta say HI to an old friend!
Can’t wait to see the next episode