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Couldn't write, so I wrote a crack!fic to get me into the groove.

Also, downvoted.

Well we all like Crack fics
I like this because....well why not just fuck around and spastically contort your body to dance, AND
Its a shit ton better than jogging or running to get frustrations out of you. PLUS it can be fun just to let loose.

:twilightoops: Spike why are you dancing?
:moustache: Am I thinking about Rarity or do I got to go?
:facehoof: The bathroom is to your left.
:duck: Silly Dragon.....

It's definitely rough in spots -- there are a few places where you wrote one word and you meant another -- but it's a sweet little vignette.

While their relationship occasionally veers into mother-son or father-daughter territory, Twilight and Spike work best as siblings. You captured this feeling well in less than 1,500 words.

You did a real good job here, nice short read.

I know where you got the inspiration for the title. :ajsmug:

I love that song! :pinkiehappy:

Also, great story.

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Thank you for the kind words, sir.

not a crack fic. neat though.

"Tea or coffee?"

I see what you did there

Also, I feel this song is appropriate

Nice little story buddy

I see the comment sectio is already filled with music, so I might as well give in to peer pressure and do it too!

https://youtu.be/Lrle0x_DHBM

It was a normal fic, until...





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Truly a culinary masterpiece

This is a very good one-shot.

This is a very wholesome crackfic

Enjoyable. :rainbowkiss:

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Wha. Don't read my shitposting

Really loved this. It was so fun natured. The whole idea of just doing something for the sake of doing it. It's so easy to get caught up in "Being Perfect" or "Don't I have better things to do?". What we have here is a story that just reminds us that it is okay to be just playful, silly, and let your cares take a sideline to a random moment of just going with the flow and not questioning it.

Your stories have delightful ways of being therapeutic. There's always a message to take away about not being so serious nor looking too deeply into something beyond what it just is. You cover other grounds but the way you have twilight and Spike just share life moments is quite unique to you while opening the reader's mind to the world around them.

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Thank you for the kind comments on all my stories, sir. How you find the time or even read my drivel is beyond me, only that I am glad that you have kept doing so.

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You inspire me so. My most recent stories were my writing. I would probably kill someone if I wrote a crackfic.

Anywho, a noice story. Really nailed Spike's carefree attitude.

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You should write more.

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