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I am saved occasionally by my wit.

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Spike

Chapters (10)
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Great start. I'm looking forward to see what's next.

Great start. I am sad this best chance wont be going into a romance between Spike and Twilight. With a amazing opening like this in setting a great mood and dynamic for the two of them I am sad to think we don't see that grow and develop as they grow older. I mean Twi is the only girl I can see Spike with equal to it not more so than Rarity.

Great story, and with the Foreshadowing the story gives, I'm excited to see where it'll lead.

Here is to many more chapters in the (hopefully) Near future! Have a 'stache :moustache:

Interesting. This could have easily been a one-shot but you are seeming to be using this prologue as a gate into the full story that will now begin. Very nice.

What was most enjoyable is Spike's relation to the dragon. We all take something from a story and his take away was certainly an unexpected one. It does make a lot of sense though. He does always want to see Twilight happy. His 'reading between the lines' really makes what may come intriguing to discover.

Alright, I’m hooked. Here’s to waiting for the next chanpter :moustache:

On man, where is this going?!

Reminds me of a pic of artwork in saw. Looking forward to more!:moustache::twilightsmile:

Wow, i read the prologue and almost immediately after you upload a new chapter. :rainbowderp: Crazy.

Anyways, so it begins. Looking forward yo seeing what befell Twilight and why Spike is travelling to the top of the world alone.

The ambiguity of the story so far is a real nice touch - makes me keep wanting more :D

Did you perhaps mean Shining or am I retarted?

The plot thickens

T H I C C
P L O T

What!? What!? What Happen!? Why did it get canceled? I am so confused and scared!!!

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the "plot" gets cancelled
rip

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