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This story is a sequel to Straight EEEs
Sparks Fly had moved to Hollow Shades as a foal along with his father. While it had seemed odd at first to be the only two unicorns in a town of bat ponies, he had grown up as all colts will.
But Sparks, and his friend Mango, have left their quiet little home town to go to Canterlot; they were both eager to join the Guard, and they had a plan!
This is my submission for the Bat Ponies: Writing Competition 2017
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and this is only a one shot?
this is a amazing story.
I agree with harts fire. This has the promise of being an interesting long running story.
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I may go into this further. For now it is a one-shot sequel, with any later ideas likely to be their own story.
8451259 I have to delete your comment. Please avoid posting content above the rating of the story.
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That uptight about language? What a NORMIE. /s
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
8451605 Not really, but this is E rated, not T or M.
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Again, /s. Just a lot of DWK recently.
8451613 Wut?
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Understandable, have a great day.
8451631 Still got no idea what you are talking about, but you keep being awesome, you hear?
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Hearing machine [B ]roke.
In all seriousness, sorry, I saw that "REEE" in the title and I couldn't resist. It's kind of late where I live, and rather than do my work, I've just been binging on memes and utter internet garbage. I've also been watching a lot of DWK (Youtuber who does episode "Recaps". Very... interesting. Hilarious, but steer clear if you don't enjoy language or very blatant and raunchy humor) and laughing like an idiot, so I AM kind of an idiot at the time of this posting.
Sorry to bother you with my nonsense, I'll leave a like for the great story, though!
8451639 Thanks for the like! And yeah, I am not much into memes and (bad) language. Just a crazy writer who likes them pons.
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Well.
Understandable.
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That one's a bit more of a wholesome meme, if you prefer.
I, also, am disappointed that this is only a one-shot.
Hehe, cute. Now if he had a levitation spell he'd definitely keep up with the best of them, but even still, diversity can be an incredible asset to a contingent.
Keep going! ;)
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Fun story, fun series, I'd love to see more. Not just sequels, after all, unless I missed something, so far we've seen Sparks arrival in Hollow Shades, and his joining the Lunar Guard, but what happened in between? I'm sure there's plenty of stories there.
As to sequels, what do the Lunar guard do, both on and off duty?
And how will they handle fitting a unicorn into their ranks considering he can't fly, the first member presumably who can't?
Assuming that there's a general animosity still towards bat ponies in Equestria due to their association with Luna, how will they react to a 'traitor' like him?
There's a lot of places you could go with this obviously (and speaking of places, I'd be exstatic if a piece of my head canon appeared, the Shadows district of Canterlot), and I look forward to anywhere you take us.
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that is all i have to say.
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EEEEEEEEEEE!
I second this. Like!
I liked this a lot, but why is it marked as complete? We all need to see more!
I can't see a corporal speaking that way to a sergeant. Might want to make him a fellow sergeant or a lieutenant. Or not, your story
8692393 Gah, you're right. The rank I was looking for was lieutenant. Sorry for the confusion.
Really cute, both of them.
SKREEEeeeeeee!
8908428 Thank you!
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I agree whole heartedly. There is so much story to make of what went on between the last story and this one!
So cute!