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    After living most of his life in Hollow Shades, Sparks Fly is heading back to the place of his birth (Canterlot) to join the Guard. Things go according to plan, but he is not exactly welcomed with open forelegs.
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Moving is never easy, well, unless you are my dad. He just tells me one day, "General Sparks the Magnificent," that is totally my name, by the way, "we are moving to Hollow Shades." I had two days to say goodbye to my friends, and pack up my things. Trains also suck, but that is because they don't let me drive them.

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This is going to be a short one (1-2 more chapters). Came up with it, felt like writing something cute. Here we go again!

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anything with EEEing bat pones is interesting

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felt like writing something cute

Success!

Move movement - More movement
gand-papa - grand-papa


I'm loving it so far. What should be an embarrassing situation for Sparks and his father is just adorably cute instead. :heart:

Cute little story.

This was a pretty good story. Any chance of a sequel?

8372643 Maybe. Got tons of stuff I am working on right now, this was just a "Write something cute" prompt from a patron.

"I wasn't sleep. My eyes just needed a rest."

asleep or sleeping (unless intentional)

I put two and two together and got just shot of eleven and a half.

shy or short

:twilightsheepish:

I see my shipping senses didn't fail me this time.

8372931 First was intentional. Second was not. Thanks for the fixes! :twilightsmile:

Hehe, cute indeed.
Keep going! ;)

We're not getting more of this??? Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy?

well i how know why the sequel is so amazing this story is awesome.

Cute little story. A few odd little word choice errors -the most annoying of which I think was characters referring to math or mathematics as "maths". I can deal with the children saying this and it being cute but when the teacher says it makes it extremely grating and distracting. Otherwise story was worth the read and will check out the sequel.

8453398 That would be my fault. Aussie writer trying his best to write US English.

Just read both chapters... why do I sink into these cute stories!? :rainbowkiss:

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