• Member Since 13th Aug, 2014
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Lazydrill


Dutch reader/writer. Fan of 2nd pov stories and cuteness overloads!( Profile art made by our Pegasister: natis120!)

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The night a little pony has been looking for for a long time has finally arrived. Ever since he heard the stories of old, he had always hoped that this day would come, and he would be there to witness it.

Art by Toonebs!
Written for the writing competition of October 2016.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 19 )

Hmm, that is an interesting idea that come up from the story name. Making all thestrals Australian instead of Romanian. :derpytongue2: Has nothing to do with the story but that's what I first thought when I saw the name. :eeyup:

7632223 I didn't even look at it that way.:rainbowlaugh:

7632223 I sure approve of it!

7632223 - As an Aussie, I greatly approve of this idea.

Fucking adorable. Can't wait for more!

You should totally add this to more groups, by the way. You'll get more comments and views for sure.

7740188 Thank you, Abyss. It means a lot coming from you! I'll do as you suggest, though. I put it only in this group, and this folder because it was originally written for fun and to compete in the contest.:twilightsheepish: Also, of course, adorable batponies!:rainbowkiss:

I learned some of the small actions by reading your story about Nightshine.:yay:

7741056 Heh, glad to hear it. I also recommend finding a cover art that'll catch readers better. If you can't commission a pic of an adorable bat pone hiding underneath his mother's legs, then maybe use a pic of Luna or something like that?

Daaaawww! How adorable!

7741059 I'll see if I can commission something for the art. I chose this for the night time feeling it gave me.:twilightsmile:

Winner of the 2nd annual writing competition.

wow just wow... 10/10

8341320
Thanks. What did you enjoy the most?:twilightsmile:

8342059
the second part of the story where princess Luna is mention. I had a feeling where this is going. Plus that part hooked me over as I read it. Then the cute part happens when the colt is excited to meet princess luna.

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Thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed!:twilightsmile:

"You're the best Princess, Princess Luna." The colt released the lunar Princess and trotted excitedly to his father behind him. He saw his mother standing next his dad, both waiting on their foal to rejoin them and celebrate the longest night of the year.

I agree with this young ones statement.

Man I love batponies. Plus I can find similarities between humans and thestals.




Very well done author.

8341320
Agreed. But I would give it an 12/10 or more

7741056

7741059
So you guys like batponies eh?

11549047
You could say that.

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