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Nyerguds


"The changeling looked at the foal much like a space explorer would look at an alien life form. He resisted the urge to prod it." - Flitter

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[Inspired by Enya - I Want Tomorrow, and written for a challenge posted by Emerald Flight in The Writer's Group.]

This is the story of the stallion who loved Luna while she became Nightmare Moon, and was loved back by her throughout it all.

In the end, though, he chose to see the dawn again. He wanted a tomorrow.

[If you fave, please upvote as well! And please comment, too; I love feedback!]

It appears that ObabScribbler did an audio reading of this tale. I'm honoured!

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Comments ( 18 )

3342616
Thank you :twilightsmile:

This was a quickie though. An idea put in my mind by that damned forum thread that I just needed to get rid of to clear my mind, so I can continue writing my main fic :rainbowwild:

I think I wrote this in less than two hours...

I enjoyed your nice little vignette.

3342999
Thanks! I'm just glad the scene I wanted to portray got me above the 1k word minimum. Vignettes like these can really be ruined by unnecessary padding.

3343051
The 1k word limit is unfortunate at times, because it's certainly possible to tell a great story in under 1,000 words. We both know the good reasons why it exists, but the side effects can be unnecessary. The story didn't really feel padded or anything when I read it. Being able to write a good postcard story is a great skill to have.

Well, consider me moved. Upvoted for well-written feels.

Nicely done. Poor bastard.

3342666 Main fic? I like idea..

Why the hell wasn't I informed that this is the user who writes "Fallout Equestria"?!?!

I mean hell people? Really? I thought I was the popular DJ on this site who you know.. if informed of these things? Damn Fimfiction, way to keep me in the loop.

I diddent mean super-write it, I mean I love his FAE stories. damn.

3344871
Umm, I didn't write Fallout: Equestria... Kkat did. :twilightsheepish: I just mess around in her world, like so many people do :raritywink:

I just write about a lonely ghoul wandering through Kkat's wasteland, really. Also, the main Fallout: Equestria is already finished, unlike my sidefic.

Mind you, if you haven't read FO:E and don't want to dive into sidefics without reading the original, but want to check out more of my stuff, I can also recommend Flitter... which is non-FO:E, is finished, and has generally been pretty well received on fimfic :twilightsmile:

3343865
Twas an experiment. I usually don't write sads without throwing in funnies to compensate :twilightblush:

3344017
Glad you approve! You got me into this, after all :rainbowwild:

3344426
Thanks :twilightsmile:

3344871

I diddent mean super-write it, I mean I love his FAE stories. damn.

Ah. Okay. Sounded like I was getting a lot of undue credit there, lol :rainbowlaugh:

I have come from the youtube fan fic reading to tell you good job and give you an upvote!

8253507
Wait, there's a youtube reading of this fic? :rainbowhuh:

Nobody told me! Link, please?

8253616
Oh! You didn't know? :pinkiegasp:
It was done by Obab Scribbler.
Here's a link.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ljbzbUmcOA0

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