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Kind of Brony


Well, I'm not much of a brony as I don't like the show, but I greatly respect the fans and their work. I often wish the fanbase of some other franchises were as talented and ambitious as the bronies.

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If Floor Board was voiced, what would she sound like?

Very interesting!
I'm very excited to see you tackle this one.

Once again, thank you for writing. :twilightsmile:

Wow, my interest is piqued. I really want to see where this goes.

So is pony society leveled up to that of modern Earth, or is this set in the future of the current cannon? Either would be fine, it just seems like a markless disorder might be a result of a modern society, where education becomes less and less tailored to the individual and more about churning out workers.

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It's actually brought up in an upcoming chapter why tech is where it is in Equestria.

Neet concept. . . .


Bad puns are bad.

Definitely interested, I'll be keeping my eye on this for sure! :twilightsmile:

Enjoyed reading part of this on 4chan. Excited to see how it turns out here :twilightsmile:

She's so cute. She reminds me of a few emo charactets from some of my favorite anime. This is new and i cant wait for more.

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Like Mr.L from death note

The read so far pretty good.

Hmmm, bipedal? I was imagining them as normal quadrapedal ponies. But the panties scene didn't fit like that...

ok I am in love with this story I love the Idea and I am looking forward to more

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Yuo ar fu***G corect!!!!!!

I lost my S*** when I saw Floor Bored featured I must read this!!!!

Hmmmm if i didnt know any better i would say that she was subconsciously being cute. Dont stop thers a los of people that love this tipe of story

Let me get this straight – she tried to hang herself with her mouse cable, and IT HELD? I want a mouse like that, mine’s cable couldn’t handle a drop from the desk.

Fresh and interesting, a rare commodity, especially where Anon in Equestria stories are concerned.

That means this next door is the shitty jackpot. "Ma'am, are you in their? This is your last chance to keep me from seeing your bedroom, and we both know you don't want a stranger looking around in there..."

there

As Anon rushes to your side, sidestepping to slowly spreading puddle and upturned bedpan, you can only stare down at yourself as images replay in your head.

the

I'm surprised Anon isn't traumatized at all, at least in any noticeable way. You would think walking in on someone hanging themselves and nearly failing to save them would be very traumatizing

I find this to be quite cute, moar please!

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Ponies are 50% floof by volume, very light. It's why a human would not enjoy walking into an attic in Equestria; they're guaranteed to fall through since structural integrity is meant only to withstand pony weight.
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Well a bit scratchy to be sure from underuse. Meek and quiet.
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:rainbowkiss:
Puns are always welcome.
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They're regular ol' ponies. The bipedal thing in the art was just a choice by the artist.
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There's some who say she's like a ponified Tomoko.
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Same here, I just got up, too.

Glad to see this up! Nothing jumped out at me other than what Tide pointed out.

but most of that training flies at mach5 out the window

Doesn't quite roll off the tongue. Maybe:

*but most of that training files out the window at Mach 5...

I don't know. I could be wrong.

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Oh I see, so her wearing of panties without pants or skirt is a bit strange then? The idea seems more provocative than she intends.

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Like Ravens voice but somewhat higher like Fluttershy?

New chapter just I was,finished with the last one yay

It's great to see such a refreshing original story. Continue the good work!

As a plumber...i find your suggestion of flushing paper towels down the toilet incredibly triggering. Other than that living the story thus far

I see, so she wears the panties not as a fetish thing but because that's all she could find to hide her shame. Not like pants or skirts are common after all. I could see panties being easier to come by since they would be more needed than novelty clothes.

This is actually quite nice.

the story is interesting.... but one thing I do not understand..... why anon? I can not understand why any one would use that name.... why not John or David or I dono..... is there a reason people use the name anon on here?

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In this case, it's because the story was originally a greentext on 4chan, and using Anon is pretty much standard since the site prides itself on it anonymity, all users being named anonymous by default upon posting and anyone using differently being called a namefag and attention whore.

They claim that the Anon makes it easier for the reader to place themselves in the character's position, but I'm doubtful of the that and am only using it in psuedo-honor of the story's origin.

There is know doubt in my mind that this resembles and emo Character from an anime and i love it!!!!

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A lot of people, like myself, aren't fans of human inserts with names like that.
But it's two sides of a coin I guess. anyone could perform a search and replace on a human name or "anon" to fit their preference.
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ADDITIONALLY, for context: much like all canon characters, "Anon" tends to be a sort of established and familiar character, in name and generally physical appearance. Personality can vary greatly, but can also be very similar between stories at times.
I'll always prefer "Anon", real names like "David" just feel generic and make the character feel foreign to me, and often like a cringy self-insert of some other real person I don't care about, so I automatically don't give a shit about that character. I preferred "Anon" before I ever got into reading any 4chan stories, so to me that aspect of it's origin as a name is irrelevant.

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It's a part of 4chan culture, the origin going back to what are called "green text" stories. Most often trollish, but /mlp/ has it's own quirk to it, especially when that's where the MLP fandom originated. And so, you get stuff like this.

This is really good stuff. :twilightsmile:

>You are Anonymous, currently filled with the warm fuzzies.

Remove the >

they really are strange, especially the lower garment.

Capitalize word at the start of the sentence.

>"It's... I just... I like them... because I feel cold."

Remove the >

Usually, you just had a few hooffuls of chips and a couple cans of Smooze a day since itting in front of a computer didn't burn a lot of energy.

sitting

rolling out of bed slowly, you belly crawl across the floor to spy through the crack along the bottom.

Capitalize word at the start of the sentence.

I'm still not entirely sure what I'm reading.... Could someone explain where Floor is from and wtf a NEET is?

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NEET is a term for " 'N'ot in E'ducation, 'E'mployment, or 'T'raining " I believe it originates from Japan, though I am not exactly sure. Floor is a character for this story and made probably with influences from anime/manga sources.

It said this stuff in the discription of the story pretty much.

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NEET or neet is a young person who is "Not in Education, Employment, or Training". So a jobless young person who gets money from the government to live off of.
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The acronym NEET was first used in the United Kingdom but its use has spread to other countries and regions including Japan, South Korea, Taiwan and the United States.

Love this story! Keep it up and I may put it my fav.

Interesting story. Definitely keeping an eye on this one.

Hehehe i love this story, keep up the good work.

Love how this is turning out:twilightsmile:

he quickly pulls his hand back and says sheepishly, "Sorry, you just looked like you were having a little trouble."

Capitalize beginning of sentence.

Sitting with a splash, you quickly bring all for legs together.

four

ok this is awesome I need more

Sometimes, a friendly face makes a world of difference. And Floor's having it bad for Anon, poor filly :rainbowlaugh:

Enjoyable story though, looking forward to more :twilightsmile:

I need moar, this story is so good it could go 4ever

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