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Setting aside a few other... things in this chapter, I'm having trouble wrapping my head around the idea that a single nation, attacking through a portal, would in turn make those they attack retaliate and systematically destroy an entire planet and enslave the survivors and regard them as little more then fodder. It honestly defies all logic, them retaliating and destroying Turkey, somewhat believable, them deciding to annihilate everyone, not so much.
Just my two cents
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I would like an answer to that as well since one would think the question of Humanity having a one world government would have been discused and found to be not true after all the time the world net work of portal had to be around before hand.
What is disgusting about it is, I think the distinction was known but arrogance of immortal leaders could care less about it. Punishing all for the actions of some when the other humans had no control or knowledge of these actions cannot be found as Justified.
This is pretty interesting but! I really don't think we would lose to them though
Why didn't you respond to the comments of Leafwebs and NothingImpossible?
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I was agreeing with nothingimpossiblie's sentiment, sorry for any confusion.
I did read all of the story as hosted by the other site, so my comment is moot; but the answer to it is emotionally crushing.
Interesting turn of events
Yessszz
Loving this read so far. So excited to see how the next chapter goes!
You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. Why isn't there a dark tag?
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Man I know how to do basic tasks on the internet lol. I just don't go through the comments a lot, I merely post the story for those who might enjoy it.
What do you mean by a dark tag though? I mean, this story isn't really a grimdark or anything. Weird and improbable, yeah, but dark..?
Wow
What would actually happen:
Equestria tries to attack Earth, gets annihilated immediately. Survivors are enslaved by humans. The end.
make love not war, a lesson the ponies need to learn judging by twilight sparkle who came down with a case of celestia pox. Its the disease that prevent alicorns from governing or doing any real ruling for convoluted reasons. Could she change the rules to allow humans to be treated as equals; yes she can however she'd rather go with the flow.
Okay, i’m getting vibes from an audio drama called “the heart’s shell” by Musescript, anybody know it by chance?
Kinda forced premise with humanity losing and being enslaved. We kind of have weapons of mass destruction and middles the ponies would have no concept of and therefore couldn’t defend against. But even if you pretend the ponies would beat humanity it’s kinda fucked they’d enslave civillians for a few attacks done by governments that the innocent people now slaves had nothing to do with. But I know this story isn’t about making sense, it’s about other things like most anime and other media are.
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When you consider that unicorns, which make up a third of Equestria's population, can be if properly trained literal living weapons of mass destruction and when you consider that the alicorns are far beyond them in power.
"How much would they pay for you?"
I don't know, a griffin might pay a little. There is a fair bit of bacon and fat on this one. The drumsticks are rather thick and Meaty though.
What does he mean by that?
Wreck them?
Which is?
Then use that to your advantage.
I would have been thinking of strategies to escape.
Really?
Nope. It’s still possible.
Drop the smile and don’t say anything.
It?
I’m using that to my advantage.
I’m taking the couch.
Rub one out?
I would use it as motivation to escape.
This would have fueled my hatred even more.
Ok, now that’s funny.
Use it to your advantage.
Guess what, b*tch? Go f*ck yourself.
I suggest you f*ck off.
What kind of consequences, b*tch?
Anon, stop being a b*tch.
Yea, an empty threat.
Push it.
Just point the middle finger at her.
I wonder where they are, now?
Just tell her the truth.
Actually, you can.
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I would think that humans wouldn't enslave ponies, if the reversed.
Unless it was an alternate human univers, with different values, and slavery was morally OK.
To many organisations would be against it on princeple alone.
And USA had a whole war about whether slavery was a good or bad thing.
Check out the negotiations-verse .
Honestly, I can’t feel sorry for neither anon or rainbow dash.
Freer?
That’s where you should have slept in the first place.
What does that mean?
But, why now?
Why?
Is he saying that or her?
Why not tell them?
What are the others?
Why pink?
Did his English change over time?
What was she going to say?
4d?
Why not?
When?
Actually, pinkie pie and fluttershy might be ok with it.
Ask them about it.
F*ck you.
Can luna go into his dreams?
Fluttershy, I love you, but shut up.
Twilight, shut the f*ck up.
Then what did she mean?
Twilight, everything you said came out of your own mouth.
WHAT?! THAT’S BULLSH*T.
What the f*ck that’s got to do with him? He was’t in the war.
Go f*ck yourself.
Just jump the b*tch.
Actually, it can.
Honestly, I wouldn’t give a f*ck.
And you didn’t stop them?
It doesn’t have to be.
Wait a minute, has she tried before?
Has this b*tch even talked to a human?
Sorry my a**.
ARE THEY F*CKING SERIOUS?
Won’t she bleed out?
Yea, let others do that.
Looking forward to reading this.
Question though.
Where can I find this story?
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https://pastebin.com/BBhke7Mn
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Exactly. I would have told her to go f*ck herself.
After reading this I really want to know what happens to the children.... It's just such a great love story
This was such a damn good story. It’s even given me an idea for a story of my own
Yeah the concept is all babblers of doesn’t make sense but okay I’ll keep reading. Ponies sure are hypocrites. I’m thid universe. Ponies aren’t typically fans of slavery. Including the crystal ponies.
I know I'm late to the "party" but this is very well done. Great job.
I don't like rainbow dash in this story, I was feeling kinda bad for anon up until this point. This is just odd. If I were in his shoes, as soon as she let me control, I would tied her to something, run out, and let myself be mailed by a bear or something.
This is good. I was worried Anon was going to become a mindless slave with all the what seemed like foreshadowing earlier on. Epic.
nice
Unfortunately, some people refuse to accept others, no matter how many movements or parades happen, others will judge people for being different. Some people are just awful. We have to deal with that. This gives a lot of vibes related to America's history with slavery. L Racism. #EverySingleLifeMatters
Ah yes, stockholm syndrome
This seems like the kind of story you'd write just because of an urge, at least from my perspective.
Maybe a contrast to other fics out there that tend to be much more misanthropic or just pleasure fics.
I'd say this goes a bit further to something a little more nuanced, but misses perfection by a hair. Just a hair.
I'd go as far to give this about 8/10 and a Wholesome Seal of Approval.
Given the kind of fic this is, and how corny it comes off as at times, it gets its message across without sounding cringefully preachy.
Plus I still had to dock a point or two for the *ahem* oral sex and light fetishes (just not my thing yo).
How this fic felt deep down though:
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I guess it was written partly because of some urge. More of them at the same time maybe.
I discovered that thread at 4chan, one I mentioned in the description. People were posting there how much they presume they would be worth as slaves to ponies. I found it ridiculous of course but interesting at the same time. People started taking it too seriously though and there was that one guy who began writing these greentexts which basically blindly praised the whole slavery thing. In the sense of being used as an object, being a good thing. (It wasn't the one who wrote the intro, that other guy was cheesy as hell, too cheesy to be referenced) I can't say why but I hated it so much that I just wanted to write a story to prove him wrong. That the whole idea of slavery is not something to be praised.
Luckily, I already found myself writing a few lines that people caught onto. The initial idea was simply based on a kink of getting dominated by the best horse™ but I felt like there should be a valid point in every story, or it doesn't amount to anything at all. So, I had my point to prove and the story to go with.
And people liked it, even though the whole idea of it was to undermine the topic of the thread that slowly began revolving around taking pleasure in being a slave and being abused.
Man, I really wrote a lot longer text than I initially planned here but I guess I needed to sort it out in my head as well.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it.
Also, fuck yeah, Elden ring reference.
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Yeah many of these things are hard to avoid especially when it's a story YOU want to tell and want to be good.
Also no problem. Still found it charming and wholesome!
PS: Well hello there, fellow Tarnished!