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Bendy
I like big ponies and I cannot lie.
Bendy
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Damn and blast you, in the best of all possible ways.
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You liked this? Hopefully I can inspire others to make sonehing similar.
8341212
*chuckles* It-- uh. Let's just say that my reading preference, like my writing, is "stuffed female set to waterbed" levels, with affection and emotional gentleness mixed with good-hard-THRUST. I just usually do anthro rather than feral/human. You have an amazing minimalist style that made me spit out my energy drink (again, meant in the best possible ways) the first time I read over a few choice passages. Honestly, your ability to convey emotional, erotic, and humorous heft is amazing, especially in comparison to those of us who can only beat thesauruses until they turn purple. I bow towards your expertise.
A lovely change of pace. More of this, please.
Sadly hyper endowment is not my thing, with the basketball sized balls and a cock twice as thick as his leg but still glad to see this, human female gangbang with male feral ponies is extremely rare on this site.
My nose is bleeding from a scene I just read. OMG 10/10
A great service indeed. They've answered one of life's many great questions.
8341245
Might do some more female human x pony fics. But I still like human male and made.
8341306
Yeah, we really need more human female x stallion.
8341341
Which one?
8341361
I'm confused. What question?
8341401
Between Sarah and Big Mac gosh how do you do it?
8341412
There needed to be more human female x stallion. Size difference and cock growth is also a bit of a fetish of mine.
Annnnnd Bendy's at it again folks
What a story, whew... talk about a gang bang, nice job bro.
8341598
We need more female human x stallion, don't you think?
Glad you liked it. Did Big Mac come across as a true gentlestallion in this?
8341630
Oh yeah, most definitely, hehehe.
And yes, yes he did
*Checks who wrote it*
Yep, it's a Bendy fic alright.
8341727
Exactly the reaction i had 5s ago
8342639
Thanks. What did you like about it?
8341727
Did you like it?
8342650
Yeah I did. You manage to make me think 'what the hell did I just read?' with most of your fics.
You are doing God’s Work.
Can't justify a downvote because it's really not bad, but it'd need a bit more to get an upvote. Admittedly hyper endowments are on the fence for me but that's not usually what affects my opinion on a story.
Honestly it feels like the word choice was what made this "eh" for me. As the great Jimmy Pop Ali once said, "Like, box, or pussy, or cunt?" when proposed changing the word "vagina" to something else. The trick is to not make it repetitive, but don't go so far as making it read like a naughty thesaurus exploded. (Though that would be interesting to see...)
The dialogue did seem a bit off too, lines like "No big boys, give it to me raw." which should have had a comma after the no and the raw, but also could've been redone entirely to show rather than tell our leading girl's excitement. (For some reason I now picture her saying "Ain't nobody got time for that! Give it to me raw!" but I'm a horrible person.)
A bit short, but I also expect that's what you were going for, unlike our protagonist, so no issue there!
Either way, hope this maybe gives some thoughts for future writings, so keep on!
8344913
Thanks for the review. I'll get your advice into consideration.
I might try get an editor for more stories in future, as I have done in the past.
Unf/10 would enjoy again.
8346559
Thanks. What parts in particular did you like?
>cadance at the end
8348995
It will be the porno for the ages.
Seriously though, did you enjoy this story overall?
8349297
it was alright. concept was great but the writing itself was a bit rushed and basic.
8349396
Well, hopefully this story can inspire others to do better with this concept.
8719759
I don't see what's wrong here.
8719788
You had
When it should be
8719795
Thanks.
I'll make changes later.