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Starring Director’s Cut (DC for short): Just your average high functioning autistic pegasister! Hope you enjoy my stories!

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Right before Christmas, in the Equestria Girls world, Anon-a-Miss was cyberbullying the students of Canterlot High. Everyone accused Sunset Shimmer of bring the perpetrator. It hurt her so badly that she decided she wanted to take her own life. However, she is saved by hearing a certain holiday song on the radio. This inspires to stay strong during the holidays. Takes place during the Equestria Girls Holiday Comic.

WARNING: Contains spoilers for the comic.

Rated T for swearing and a suicide attempt.

I do not own the song.

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The story is good but the chapters are short so maybe you should expand each chapter to give more detail for readers to enjoy

Only Pinkie Pie could have a cookie decorator launcher for these kind of things.

Nice use if the CCDL and at the end with Trixie:rainbowlaugh:

i want to see all those kids begging for forgivness to sunset

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Two things. One, how the hell did vinyl hear sunset? I don't care how loud she screamed it, there is no way vinyl heard her from INSIDE THE STUDIO:flutterrage:! Two, can we have a link to the song when you put it in? I don't remember how it goes or if it's that bad/good

Comment posted by psvitafanboy222 deleted Nov 21st, 2016

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Vinyl was outside when she heard it and a link to the song will be posted in a future chapter.

7727079 Presumably it's for bullying a**hole emergencies.

Comment posted by Dragonborne Fox deleted Nov 23rd, 2016

Before I read the story, is the Dark tag jest for the suicide attempt.

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It's for the Sunset's depression and suicide attempt.

Sunset's phone vibrated. She opened it and found a text from Applejack.

That's a Red Flag right there. If they where really her friends they would be at the hospital waiting. Not god knows where texting her an apology!

When Twilight was done explaining what happened, her pony friends were shocked.
Pony Applejack gasped, "You're leaving now?"

Twilight ~ "Well, duh! You would too if one of your friends was in hospital!

Pony Fluttershy said, "But what about your first Hearth's Warming in the Castle?"

Twilight ~ "What about my friend's first Christmas with friends ending at the hospital after an attempt at suicide!"

Pony Rainbow Dash asked, "What happened?"

Twilight ~ "Pw-What happened?" :twilightoops: "I JUST TOLD YOU WHAT HAPPENED!!" :twilightangry2: "Sunset Shimmer tried to kill herself after her friends abandoned her!"

Then she yelled out the window, "ISN'T THERE ANYONE OUT THERE WHO KNOWS WHAT CHRISTMAS IS ALL ABOUT?"

Comment posted by grl6p deleted Nov 25th, 2016

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You heard Maud, Sunset will not be accepting visitors.

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Good one pinkfloydpig!

This is gonna be a wild ride.

It's a little rushed in places, and your wording could use some touch up to make it flow better, but you have a fairly solid idea here. I'll keep reading.

This has been one darn fine story.
I actually liked what Vinyl did. Thought it was a kind thing for her to do

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I'll have the final chapter up by Christmas. School and my other stories have taken up my time.

It also figures the human Pinkie Pie is enjoying the event of the cookie launcher and decides a taste. :rainbowlaugh:

Sunset Shimmer's blood is upon the hands of everyone at Canterlot High.

Comment posted by Shadowlord deleted Mar 1st, 2017

Sunset said, "Thanks Sunset, but everybody knew before Anon-a-Miss that you were undatable."

Sunset is supposed to be Trixie, and that's the only error I spotted but I'll be on the lookout for more!

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