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Starring Director’s Cut (DC for short): Just your average high functioning autistic pegasister! Hope you enjoy my stories!

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Following the huge fight with her brother, Twilight is depressed until “Cadance” decides to take her to a nearby bar for a few drinks. She goes on a bender and ends up waking up in a hospital hungover, in pain, and surrounded by her friends and loved ones with no memory of what happened before she got knocked out.

After a huge tell-off, she learns that fake Cadance/Queen Chrysalis did something horrible to her that led to her hospitalization and the wedding being postponed. She discovers how the changeling invasion went down, and that everyone ended up learning a hard lesson.

Based off of a recurring dream I had of Twilight getting hammered and drunkenly going off at everyone for abandoning her.

Rated T for drinking, an allusion to date rape, suggestive humor, and cursing.

Cover art belongs to IFlySNA94

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 31 )

I think the recap at the start is a little redundant and breaks the flow of the scene. The rest of the prologue is a little fast-paced and simplified, but the idea behind it is certainly interesting.

Getting a woman drunk and then ruffing her drink to knock her out? You sure you're not mistaking Chrysalis for Bill Cosby?

Hmmm interesting. Lets see how badly everything goes eh?:trixieshiftright:

Okay, did something get skipped over? One second Twilight's cussing everyone out, then Cadance does their rhyme, and suddenly everything's okay?

8840026
I am glad I'm not the only one who has a problem with that, it is so weird

8840026
I feel like she just needed to get her anger out of her system. Also I don't drink, so I'm not certain, but I'm pretty sure a hangover would put anyone in a bad mood.

ok this is going to be good, but I can see twilight getting hammer after they beat the changeling queen but before they redo the wedding, and she with the real Candace and that where Candace learns about what happen while she was trap

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As someone that does drink and has had more than my fair share of hangovers, I can say that yeah, they suck. That still doesn't explain her sudden change in temperament, as hangovers can last for hours. What helps me is plenty of water, scrambled eggs, and sleep. (Not sure why, but eggs are perfect for hangovers.) But even then, it takes me several hours to get back to normal.

8840026 Add another reader to that confused list. :rainbowhuh:

Seriously Chinese food and twilight changing her tone after the doctor says she can go?

I'll see where it goes, but Twilight's attitude is fairly unreasonable; one minute she curses out her idiots, then suddenly they're her best buddies.

Reserving judgement.

8885045

She is still drunk AND is slightly hungover from what booze her body has already burned off, so it's sending her into a sort of pregnancy style mood swings, I have seen it happen mostly to those who don't drink much or are first time drinkers with no resistance. After a couple of hours, some coffee and some sleep she should be fine :pinkiehappy:

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Ah. I wouldn't know; I've never been drunk or around anyone who was drunk. Same goes for hung over.

Edit: I'm well aware of how weird that is, but frankly I can't say I'm missing out.

9070520

Being drunk is fun to a point, though thanks to genetics I don't get hangovers AND I can remember EVERYTHING :pinkiehappy:

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No, this didn’t happen. What actually happened will be revealed in the next chapter.

"I have never had a hangover (or any form of alcohol, I'm still a minor) before so I may get a few things wrong about the topic."

Kids these days.

Really? She does a 180 just like that? Yeah I'm not buying it.

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You can say its dead now. I'll be writing a story that was inspired by this one where Twilight woke up and saw that she was pregnant but have no idea how she became pregnant in the first place. Chrysalis will be by Twilight's side the entire time during the entire pregnancy, but the story won't have the mature rating. The story will have the teen rating with the sex tag because of, hello, talks about sex from Chrysalis.

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