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Twilight Star

I like to write stories about the shippings: TwiLuna, MoonLight, NightmareRarity, RariLuna, NightmareNightmare, ChryLight and TempestLight


King Sombra has returned, conquered the Crystal Empire and has Twilight at his mercy. Now, Twilight needs to do everything to get out of the place she is trapped and save the Crystal Empire of Sombra. But when King Sombra confronts Twilight, he ends up finding in the mare that tried to stop him a queen to rule the Crystal Empire with him.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 12 )

Is there going to be a part two.

I'm not sure, but I don't think so.

“Twilight, I know you were sent by Princess Celestia, and came here alone.” Sombra pointed out.

Wow Wow Wow... Stop right there, of course he knows. Twilight just told him about that.

Twilight’s mouth fell open. “How do you know it was the Princess who sent me to come here? And how do you know that I came alone?”

Again, you JUST told HIM that.

*Ahem* Miss Twilight Star, I think you rewrote some parts and didn't erase them. Could you please check the whole story?

I'm sorry about these two errors, but I already fixed it

It's okay, everyone has problems like these.

I don't know why, but I feel like I need a sequel.

Sequel please

Hmmm. Not bad. Not bad at all. I like this.

This seems like a good prologue.

So I guess the next fanfic will be King Sombra will get his revenge (Celestia and Luna) with Queen Twilight

Hello. Can I just translate your story?

Yes. Just don't forget to give the credits

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