Starring Director’s Cut (DC for short): Just your average high functioning autistic pegasister! Hope you enjoy my stories!
In the Applewood Derby, Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash take over the CMC's carts and race them for their own desires. Everyone knows at the end that the girls apologized to each other, the race is done all over again, happy ending. Right? Wrong!
It will take three injured fillies and disqualification for these mares to learn their lesson. Basically an alternate ending where Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash actually get karma for being selfish.
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Nice idea and chapter!
Putting aside my thoughts on the topic, I just want to say, one high functioning autistic to another, that this was a really good effort. The use of one or two sentences at a time make it a little difficult to keep my focus because of the smaller level of detail in them, but that's not a serious problem overall. I admit it doesn't get an upvote from me, but writing this, I feel like I was too harsh when I downvoted it before I was done (Sorry about that).
Will you be doing other alternate endings for episodes?
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Maybe,
Finally, a story that absolves the track layout of any wrongdoing (even though its architects are definitely not innocent) and puts it squarely on the offending mares. And this is exactly what Cheerilee needed to be doing.
If
, 
, and 
had taken the time to listen and observe, rather than be a herd of selfish impulsive idiots, even the clover leaf layout wouldn't have had any effect on the action.
There are still questions for Cheerilee, the participant board, and a number of other officials, though. We can get to that later.
Not entirely sure about completely disregarding whatever moron designed the track, but an enjoyable read nonetheless.
It's also Cheerilee's fault for not disqualifying them (or rather threaten to disqualify them) in the first place.
The inspiration for this version of the derby aftermath.
Also, a single day in the hospital? After an incident like that?
Thank you for doing this.
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She was so angry that she conjured extra sets of appendages to get her point across.
grl6p,
I approve!
tecnically the cmc didnt do anything so which means they get to race again cause they didnt get disqualified applejack rarity and rainbowdash is