Castle Sweet Castle

WARNING: S5E3 episode synopsis spoilers! Also, this fic may or may not set expectations. You have been warned!

The ponies try to make Princess Twilight's castle feel more like home after finding out she's been avoiding it.

Cover art from the show. Edited by Izanagi and The Daring Cookie.

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Inkwell Prose

Inkwell Prose #1 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

Well written and good storyline. Could even see this as an episode. Well done!

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Pump It Up #2 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

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Thank you! I started writing this quite a few weeks before the episode came out, but a bunch of stuff got in the way. Oh well, better a little late than never!

Inkwell Prose

Inkwell Prose #3 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

5861467 Well good job on the final product!

StevieBond

StevieBond #4 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

Now I would've loved the episode much more if it was written this way, great job.

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #5 · Apr 13th, 2015 · 1 · ·

...I think I liked this better than the episode.

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Pump It Up #6 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks!

PinkFire The Pony

PinkFire The Pony #7 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

I could see this being a real episode! I honestly think this is just as good if not better than the real episode. Great work!

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Pump It Up #8 · Apr 13th, 2015 · · ·

5862250 Thanks!

Hillbe

Hillbe #9 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

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Pump It Up #10 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks!

comicfan616

comicfan616 #11 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

My only problem with this: Why wasn't it marked as AU? At first, I thought you just ripped the episode and put it to fanfiction.

CassandraMyOCisBestpony

CassandraMyOCisBestpony #12 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

Fluttershy said. “I was thinking of bringing some of my animal friends inside, but Larry didn’t want to cooperate.”

Smart bear.

FoolRegnant

FoolRegnant #13 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

Eh. Wasn't terrible, especially on the writing front, but the characters seemed a bit too... immature to be fully in character. Fluttershy was pretty one-dimensional, in particular.

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Pump It Up #14 · Apr 14th, 2015 · · ·

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Hm, guess you're right.

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I was concerned that might happen. More Season 1 than Season 5, right?

MalekPony

MalekPony #15 · Dec 23rd, 2016 · · ·

Fluttershy didn't say anything at first, instead just staring forward. "Why don't you like your castle?" she finally said.
The purple alicorn sighed. "It's not that I don't like it, it’s that...the library was my home. I lived there, I ate there, I had fun there. And it was gone just like that.” She slammed her hoof on her crystalline floor. “And I hate change. I absolutely abhor it. Even when it’s something good like my wings—” Twilight spread her wings out carefully for emphasis “—I still find myself hating it. I always feel like everything will change for the worse, and I won’t be happy anymore.”

I can't blame Twilight for saying that; the Golden Oaks Library had been her longtime home spanning four seasons from the show's debut in 2010 until the Season 4 finale where Tirek destroyed it.

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