With three amazing blue ribbons up for grabs, the Applewood Derby is supposed to be an exciting extracurricular project for the students at the Ponyville Schoolhouse.
But as any professional race-car driver can tell you, there isn’t always a happy ending on the course. And when there’s a great big pile-up – the money shot for many paying customers – injuries don’t mean much to anyone who isn’t in the affected party’s camp.
Well, in this alternate ending, we go into greater detail about the aftermath of the race. There is no do-over, just a hard painful lesson about communication between the sides. All sides.
Their suffering will not be for nothing.
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You forgot to mention that Cheerilee LET them brake the rules and not disqualify them for sitting in the drivers seat. So Cheerilee is also a bit at fault.
7902248 Don't forget that this story starts in the thick of the race. Cheerilee isn't a hooves-on character, so of course she was going to let it slide just like she did the Spoiled Rich incident.
7903035 Not very good at her job then.
This is really good. You should read my version of the Alternate ending. It's similar, but still good.
8010997 Actually, I did. That's where I got the idea.
Well done.
This should interest you, too.