Glad you stopped by, but I don't know how much longer I'll stay.
This is my opinion on what could have happened in the episode '28 pranks later '... (this is my very first story so there might be some mistakes)
Rainbow Dash has turned the entire town into cookie-eating zombies who want to teach her a lesson. Rainbow can't help but feel guilty, she basically killed everypony. But the problem is, she pays for a tragedy that didn't even happen...
Note: rated teen for Death only. And if you don't like character deaths, please don't read it.
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Sounds like Luna decided to intervene before there's a repeat of the "Mysterious Mare Do Well" incident. Not the best story I've ever read, but a good attempt at a rarely seen and under appreciated concept.
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Thanks
Nice to see some people like it
Mare-Do-Well. Hate that episode. This may not be the best outcome for this episode, but this is the same as the former episode. Again. Rainbow was OOC. I'm not going into it. It's rage inducing.
I enjoyed the concept of this fanfiction, as the "prank" had certainly gotten out of hoof and the Mane Six were extremely out of character. Although it escalated pretty fast at some areas and the point of view was all over the place, I liked the descriptions and thought this is pretty good for your first story! Some advice is that you may want to watch your pacing. You may not notice it, but the story seemed rushed and didn't exactly flesh out the idea of suicide as that's an extremely triggering subject. But good job, it was a nice read! Keep up the hard work!
Okay, so wait is this a dream for the Mane 6 or what, after all this story is rate "T" instead of "M" so I'm guessing that the Rainbow that hung herself is just a dream version of Rainbow or something like that, this way the Real Rainbow is alive and well outside of the dream then.
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To be honest, I don't even know what I'm writing...
Don't judge me I'm just an 11 year old kid.
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For 11 years old you wrote a great story, I'm over twice your age and I can't write this good myself, of course I would love to see some fanfics based off of this episode and the Mare-Do-Well (AKA the Pony Darkwing Duck) episode where Rainbow figures out what is really going on and makes sure that it backfires on her friends then.
7816660 Thanks, it means a lot to know that people do like what I do
( I do not English)
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, or did everything actually happen in the real world
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Now you got me...
Was this all a dream before they set the '28 days later' prank in motion
And also.... PLEASE DO A SEQUAL, LIKE A YEAR OR SO LATER ON THE ANNIVERSITY OF THE PRANK!!!
Sorry for that...
If this thing was a dream, or if was in real life is up to you..
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Hey! No spoilers!
Sorry for the late reply.
What? You can't just leave it like that! Was it all a dream, of is it for us to decide?
I love these type of things, by the way.
The voice was totally Rainbow Dash! I'm calling it now!
This was very interesting, but I feel like the mane 6 isn’t as sad as they should be.