These past years had been a life-changeing experience for two little ponies. Two very different ponies, yet two best friends. Until an incident puts their friendship out of balance, driving the two apart. None of them could look at the other in the eye since then. And they never talked with each other unless it was absolutely necessary.
Now everything's back to square one, except none of them forgot what happened, they never will. The incident left both wounded which turns to a scar. Unlike bruises, scars don't always fade. It'll always be there to remind you of what happened. And unlike wounds, scars don't hurt. Not anymore.
But what will happen when somepony makes an unexpected decision when both are still recovering? Will they both suffer from being apart, or will they keep in touch, and maybe pull through?
Edit: Changed Title.
Ok, an interesting setup, have a like and a track.
I think you should look for some groups to add this too if you want people to find it. Otherwise, it will only have a short space on the new and newly updated columns on the front page. If you add it to groups it will show up in their feeds as well.
I added it to four groups for you, there are perhaps others that'll suit it too, just don't go overboard and add it everywhere.
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Thanks! It's nice to know people like what I write. And thank you for advertising it too, I've gotten quite a few notifications afterwards. I'll try taking your advice.
Nice! Love the interactions with the characters. And, I have noticed some improvements in your writing. There seems to be more detail added into this, is this from experience?
Either way, I want to find out what happens.
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I’ll leave that for next time.
Ok,for the second one, I'm assuming Dash's aunt is dead. So.... why is she and Dash's uncle still sending stuff to them? Is it another pony or what? Sorry, not hating. I fairly like this chapter, it shows great build up in character and their friendship.
I'm still saying this is from experience though. I mean, 3k+ words?! That's unusual for you since I read your other stories. They all have less than 2,000 words.
sorry, it's quite messed up.