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lLoveRainbowDash


Trying to get my life together.

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Rainbow Dash loves flying, and wonders if she can go faster. She tries to fly faster than ever before. Once a storm starts brewing below her, she decides it's time to stop and head back, but wait... where is she? She flies through the clouds, hoping to get a better guess as to where she is, until she finds herself stuck, in a place nopony wants to stay long.


Amazing help from Reece and Fantasia!

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 94 )

Hmm... Now this looks good. :rainbowderp:



You have my interest.

How will Rainbow Dash get out of this one? Let’s w hope it doesn’t end in tragedy like the tag says.

For a second, I thought that this was going to be sort of like a horror story where Rainbow Dash is flying for a long time and she’s flying above a field of clouds and below the clouds is the ocean and she can’t fly forever.

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Flying endlessly over an ocean... That's true horror right there. Imagine one's thought process of that. Wow, gives me goosebumps thinking about it. :rainbowlaugh:

Is the Rainbow Dash from the photo going to be explained. I might have a few good guesses or reasons if that is the case. Reasons I won’t reveal right now in case I’m right.

Good chapter!

...well, this situation doesn't seem likely to end well.:twilightoops:

Welp. At least she's starting to remember what's important. Now if she can just find some snacks... or a familiar direction to fly in....

Chapters 3-5 were lovely! Here’s to more chapters in the future!

Looks like Rainbow’s had more than one ailment to deal with already....

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...huh. You learn something every day.

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True that. I had to look up ailment, to be honest. :twilightsheepish:

Was Rainbow Dash beaten severely, like a lot of scratches by the bear or is the pain mild?

Great chapter!

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Pretty severely. Not enough to die, don't worry, but still pretty bad.

Who will that some pony be?

Another good chapter!

That worked out better than I hoped.

Now to see just how near- or far- any kind of companionship is....

Jumping to conclusions fast, aren’t you girls, hmm?

Great chapter!

Wait so rainbow from the future stole the fruits? Or from the way it's presented it seems more likely that it's a. Relative future-past rainbow

Oh boy... just when you think the situation can't get any more off the rails, the rest of the girls get involved.:facehoof:

Yeah, it does kind of sound like time-travel shenanigans are happening, but we'll just have to see....

Rainbow Dash isn’t getting the best of luck lately, huh? Poor Rainbow Dash.

Great chapter!

At least she's not totally unfamiliar (in her subconscious, anyway) with this kind of thing.vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/mlp/images/1/19/Rainbow%2C_Rarity%2C_and_Spike_crossing_the_desert_MLPTM.png
And hey, maybe there's shade at the bottom!:rainbowwild:

Nice chapter with some suspense and calmness.

One step- or drift- at a time....

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Yup... Sometimes you gotta take it step by step, or should I say drift by drift :rainbowlaugh:

Rainbow reaches civilization. Hopefully, she’ll get fixed up.

Well, that's improvement in one way. Though just what sort of company this is remains to be seen....

Is this story based off of the Autraeoh series?

Talk about into the fire....

How am I gonna get out of here...?

How and when?

Hmm.

At least being put to work means she's had some medical attention as well. Can't let slaves wear out too quickly after all.:applejackunsure:

A helpful light at that. The relationship which Rainbow and London is nice.

Hm... as far as slave auctions go, they got off pretty lucky. Even besides going with somepony apparently halfway decent, the auctioneer didn't even consider splitting up the "family".

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Yeah, I'd count that as pretty lucky. Most ponies might put them straight to work after buying them.

It's funny how everypony thinks they're family! They don't even look that similar. :rainbowlaugh:

By the way, thanks for reading and commenting. It's nice to see that people are reading and, I think, enjoying. :twilightsmile:

Yep, they can definitely use this rest.

Finally, a little more context! More, in fact, than Rainbow realizes....

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Yeah, I added that bit to maybe clear some things up and give you a bit of context. Glad it helped!

How long will it take for things to crumble down once more for Rainbow Dash if that happens? Hopefully, it won’t.

Great chapter!

Yeah, no way this can last indefinitely... but Rainbow can certainly appreciate it while it lasts.

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