• Member Since 26th Aug, 2019
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Dash--


Needless to say, life is a gust of wind, and I'm a leaf on a brisk Autumn day.

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The incident that changed her life may have just been something simple, but simplicity can lead to something far more complex in the long run. Rainbow gets badly injured and loses her voice... permanently.

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I'm sorry, while this is an alright story, I didn't like the way how Rainbow Dash treated Everypony, especially Twilight. It would work if the ponies turned against or treated her badly first. A good example of that would be in the story; The Broken and the Damned, I highly recommend that story. I'm sorry if my thoughts on this story isn't much of a good one. It's still an alright story. I'll be looking forward to reading more of I will wait. Again, sorry for the criticism.

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No worries, criticism and feedback is always welcome. :twilightsmile:

And yes, I'll start working on I Will Wait real soon.

I don’t feel like this story had a proper end. I feel like maybe it should have ended with her fixing things with the other citizens and telling twilight how she felt. I don’t feel like she should get her voice back though. I give this story a 6.5/10.

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