• Member Since 26th Aug, 2019
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MAN0WAR832


TwiDash is the best ship. Change my mind. I dare you.

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The incident that changed her life may have just been a simple mistake, but simplicity can be lead to something far more complex in the long run. Rainbow gets badly injured and loses her voice... permanently.

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I'm sorry, while this is an alright story, I didn't like the way how Rainbow Dash treated Everypony, especially Twilight. It would work if the ponies turned against or treated her badly first. A good example of that would be in the story; The Broken and the Damned, I highly recommend that story. I'm sorry if my thoughts on this story isn't much of a good one. It's still an alright story. I'll be looking forward to reading more of I will wait. Again, sorry for the criticism.

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No worries, criticism and feedback is always welcome. :twilightsmile:

And yes, I'll start working on I Will Wait real soon.

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