Taking place a week after the dreaded Wedding incident Twilight Sparkle find's herself isolated and alone inside her home after chewing out her so called friends and family for their harsh treatment towards her. After spending a whole week barricading herself from the outside world and from those who betrayed her, our young unicorn begins to wonder if Friendship really is magic or just a big fat lie.
A prequel to Anon a Mystery
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it was ok
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Thanks man
What’s with the overload of ellipses and the colored text?
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I thought the colored text would add a little rage and anger to Twilights outburst earlier in the story.
Twilight has every right to be angry, but you wrote her as being WAY too hyper aggressive. Physical violence is also completely out of character for her.
Great story. Only wished Luna was in it more. Certainly she didn't take kindly to what happened at the wedding rehearsal & had plenty of things to say to help them see the folly of their mistakes.
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I wrote it as to have Twilight let her emotions get the better of her which would cause her to lash out more physically causing her to go out of character.
evil is not the opposite of kindness, mean/cruel is.
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Oh yeah your right, I thought evil would be the complete opposite of Kindness but it was actually Mean and or Cruel. Thanks for the correction😉
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Yeah your right, I should have used Luna a bit more in the story. But I wanted to focus more On twilight and the others who were present in the wedding hall.
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Fair enough.
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dear princess celestia
friendship is and always has been magic. unfortunately not every friendship can last, sometimes you have to end friendships with those who have done you wrong and dont show remorse, as much as it may hurt you to do so, It 'can make everything you went through a waste of time and emotion, and it make you feel like a failure, even when you tried everything. because unfortunately there will be be ponies who use you and pretend that they like you just to use you for their own selfish desires. And when your no longer of use for them or do something to piss them off, they up and ditch you like a broken tool. but you have to gain the strength to move on, and ive gained that strength during those lonely hours i spent without you all. And luckily i know five friends who have yet to do it at least permanently, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie the elements of Honesty, generosity, kindness, loyalty, and laughter. even after today they showed remorse and such, will work doubly hard to represent their element, just as i shall do. lies, selfishness, cruelty, ego, and irritation are temporary "imps" so to say of friends and dont last. you know yesterday i told this story to a pony on the street and he suggested to break it off with my friends and never see them again, saying "None of them showed the least bit of sympathy for you in the wedding hall and they up and went on ahead without you with damn smiles on their faces! And honestly I'm surprised they all learnt nothing from that Lesson Zero incident and out of all those traitors, I expected at least Spike, Fluttershy, Pinkie, and maybe even Dash to have your back. But in the end they're all just as evil as that damn insect and every other Adversary you faced. if i were you i would've strangled that good for nothing brother of yours and slapped celestia right in her face" i understand where the the pony is coming from, i do think my friends definitely owe an apology to me, but i'm also at fault for not explaining myself better, and for acting like a jealous foal" to conclude, Each and everyone of them is still wonderful and I still believe that moving to Ponyville and meeting these wonderful ponies was the best decision i ever made in my entire life. and the best part of friendship is when you make a mistake, you realize you made a mistake and try even harder to be a better friend, that's the whole point of friendship lessons, every time i write we get a little bit better at friendship,and after this lesson, i'll be a lot calmer and reasoned when i try to warm somepony of something, and they'll all learn not to stab me in the back and abandon me when I was only trying to save your sorry ASSES!!!!!!!!! sorry, i was just venting a little. as i learned when we fought discord, friendship isn't always easy, but god dammit it's worth fighting for. and i just hope if they ever abandon me, i'll be able to move on. but for now, the future's looking bright, and i dont know what it is,but i have a feeling my life is about to change in a drastic and wonderful way, and this student for one, cannot wait! warmest regards, your forever faithful student, twilight sparkle
P.S tell shiny and cadence congratulations on the baby!
(a more positive take on her angry letter)
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I cant believe I didn't think of adding an additional letter to Celestia in the stories ending scene, You letter sounds amazing it definitely show's how much twilight learned about reconciliation and friendship fallout's all week and I like how you added her congratulation Shiny and Cadences upcoming baby
That was amazing man!!!!!!!
P.S I'm happy you enjoyed the story
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thank you, I thoroughly enjoy twilights development during all those seasons, and I also think a canterlot wedding was my favorite series premiere/finale. along with the crystal empire, skool daze, begining and ending of the end, twilight's kingdom, and the cutie remark. and as celestia said to twilight "learning to trust your instincts is a powerful lesson to learn" now that's certainly "a lot to think about" also, although it's detrimental to a story, I love these overreacting moments that really sells it for me and gives me a good laugh when i see it. thanks for the story man.
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Thanks man i'm glad you enjoyed it and I agree with your views of some of the season finales lesson's. I figured that after how they treated Twilight in the final episode I wanted to show how much their hurtful word's and abandonment affected her and her views of friendship and reconciliation cause honestly she forgave them way too easily in the episode especially since Applejack was the only one who apologized and Shining Armor and Celestia acted like they didn't do anything wrong in the second part's finale. Honestly if I wrote the episode I would have had everyone Celestia, the main 5, spike, and ESPECIALLY Shining armor give Twilight a heartfelt apology before the wedding start's.
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yeah, seems like the writers always rushed over those parts of the story, at least in the movie, they had a slightly better albeit rushed apology. wich is why i think you'd be perfect to write them a proper apology.
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you know I just realized, would the events of mlp movie have happened the same if this story was canon? would twilight friends abandon her a second time, or would they stand by her this time, and how would their visit with Novo go down, would the mistakes of the movie be erased? and what of tempest? what would be her role in this?
You need add some Punctuations.
What story should I start reading after this? You said it was a prequel to Anon A Mystery, but idk what story to read.
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Anon a Mystery pic's up after this one so that's what you should read next since it's the followup
Cadence was adopted
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Really? I didn't know that. Which episode was this revealed ?
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https://www.google.com/search?q=cadence+back+story&rlz=1CAKVPC_enUS929&oq=cadence+back+story&aqs=chrome..69i57j0i13i512j69i59j0i5i10i13i30j0i5i13i30j69i61j69i60l2.4977j0j7&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8#fpstate=ive&vld=cid:cc042537,vid:geWnnBKs5q4
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Wow now that is pretty deep, all I can say is Cadence is one lucky girl to have been taken in by Tia and Luna as her aunt. Thanks for sharing😉
Very good. I don't usually like ones where Twilight stays mad at her friends like Bitterness, but I might be opening up to one's where she forgives then in the end. This got a like a fave from me.
Edit: They real did good apologies here and owned up to their mistakes I say. Also you have Rarity say she is a poor excuse of a mare twice.
I love happy endings....
I love sequels more....and I would definitely love a sequel.....
Alright not entirely true but I would like a sequel, there is more potential in this story.