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Nice job. I can't wait to see how this turns out
the r63 was for the main perso?
good beginning
7469076 yep, main character.
Oh look a Fate/Stay crossover! We really need more of those!
....Shit...
7469457 sorry
I don't even have mature on and I see something. The title should look like this: I Am the Bone of My Sword.
7469760 no I am correct there is no capital a in I am unless you can show me evidence that disproves it?
A story in the past that actually uses old English don't see many of those good story you got my like and follow
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I LIKE THIS GUY!
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Also, are you open to crosses? I happen to know a certain pirate who would love to appear here...
7470546
Did someone mention Piracy?
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A few surface notes. Firstly, if I were you I'd abridge the title to something a bit snappier. "I am the Bone of my Sword" is a bit of a mouthful. Might I suggest "The Bone of my Sword" or even simply "I am my Sword"? They flow better and too long of a title can repel readers who are on the fence.
Second, you probably should get a cover image. It needs to be something that showcases the contents of the story, like the setting, the main characters, or the themes and conflict of the story.
Third, why did you use the inferior Fate Series? Fate/Zero was better by a wide margin and Emiya Kiritsugu is a fucking god!Third, into the meat of your story, I would highly suggest a different angle for the protagonists and main conflict. The fact is, crossovers are already hard enough to pull off on their own, but crossovers with humans- particularly genre savvy otakus- as the protagonists is going to be nearly impossible to stretch the audience's suspension of disbelief over. Now, it's your story, and you can do what you want, but I've been around and, let me tell you, this is going to get some fairly harsh- and admittedly accurate- criticism for being an overused premise.There's some notes. Best of luck on whatever you do though.
7470401 hehehe I wonder why.
7470546 yeah I'd be open for a cross over.
7470613 yo ho and fiddle de dee you are a pirate!
7470640 how do you mean a different angle for the conflict, are we talking about an antagonist surfacing or an event that puts them at odds with the princesses? Yeah I have someone I'm planning on commissioning to make the cover art but they are full atm for now there is a placeholder.
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It was me! I did it!
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How familiar are you with Super Sentai?
7471349 let's see I've seen power rangers up to jungle fury, vr troopers, big bad beetleborgs, a few EPs of Kamen rider, yes I know of the gokai version of power rangers, though only ever watch one episode.
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Well, good enough, I suppose. So, how's about it? Wanna cross with a silver clad pirate?
7471628 sure
FIRST!!!
It was nice to work on this!
7472807 indeed it was fun.
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probably should post a link to my page/story so the people know who you're crossing with tho...
7472812 it's in the authors notes
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Right, I also redirected some of my readers here as well!
7472824 kk
funny i liked it
LMAO Neokiva that was great second chapter Looks good keep it up at least we now know that Archer is a heroic spirit kinda suprised that they had to kill starsworld
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WE FORGOT TO ADD THIS!!!!
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Ah, my theme song. Glorious.
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If you have plans for the cover art, then no worries, mate. I was more just making sure this would have something.
Honestly, what I was saying was your main characters more so than the plot (maybe me saying conflict was bad phrasing). Let me put it this way; if this is a crossover anyways, and you want Archer in the story, then why not cut out the middle man and just put Archer from Fate/Stay Night as the protagonist? All I'm saying is a story featuring main characters who are average cosplayers from our world is a cliche that people generally dislike.
That said, if you do want to write it with the protagonists you have, go ahead. There's nothing stopping you, I'm just telling you that you're going to catch a lot of flak.
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Aye then, Lad! Do ye wish to sail the brine in search of booty?
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Gai's a space pirate, so NOBODY IS SAFE.
Hi! I HAVE RETURNED
Gonna be honest tho, writing the bondage scene with Clover? Made me feel a little funny.
7477805 No shit, it made me feel uncomfortable. Fuck man, that was some freaky role playing right there.
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Glad you enjoyed it so much!
7478144 ..... You trolling cunt.
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7478164 If my name wasn't of any indication to you, I don't know what is.
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7478189 Of fucking course. You ass.
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Huh. So far this is tame as far as Displaced sexual deviation. There are three I am aware of that wind up with families by now, and they aren't the joke verse that DK is. Here is a hint to that, constant heat cycle, plus ponies, plus a dude who showed up wearing just the DK tie. The whole world is a protracted orgy.
7497772 I keep hearing about this but I've searched DK tags and haven't seen it. I'm beginning to think this fic doesn't exist.
7498537 It doesn't, but it is a good joke of the Displaced formula, and it also explains away some of the possible realities without slowing the story down.
I can has crossover? Because there is a distinct lack of dragon.
7502447 not yet I just had one crossover and I need to fill out the world and plot more, perhaps in a later chapter.
7502658 more than undetstandable. Keep me posted yeah?
7502698 sure
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...progress report on the next chapter?