Nice job. I can't wait to see how this turns out

the r63 was for the main perso?
good beginning

7469076 yep, main character.

Oh look a Fate/Stay crossover! We really need more of those!

displaced fic

....Shit...

7469457 sorry

I don't even have mature on and I see something. The title should look like this: I Am the Bone of My Sword.

7469760 no I am correct there is no capital a in I am unless you can show me evidence that disproves it?

A story in the past that actually uses old English don't see many of those good story you got my like and follow

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I turned to see my other friends Jason and Tony struggling to contain their laughter. I had met both of them in freshmen year of high school; Jason was seven foot tall and lanky with a short mop of ginger hair, blue eyes and wore a pair of thin rimmed specs that reminded me of Shiroe from Log Horizon. Which incidentally was his cosplay for today.

I LIKE THIS GUY!

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Also, are you open to crosses? I happen to know a certain pirate who would love to appear here...

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Did someone mention Piracy?

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A few surface notes. Firstly, if I were you I'd abridge the title to something a bit snappier. "I am the Bone of my Sword" is a bit of a mouthful. Might I suggest "The Bone of my Sword" or even simply "I am my Sword"? They flow better and too long of a title can repel readers who are on the fence.

Second, you probably should get a cover image. It needs to be something that showcases the contents of the story, like the setting, the main characters, or the themes and conflict of the story.

Third, why did you use the inferior Fate Series? Fate/Zero was better by a wide margin and Emiya Kiritsugu is a fucking god! Third, into the meat of your story, I would highly suggest a different angle for the protagonists and main conflict. The fact is, crossovers are already hard enough to pull off on their own, but crossovers with humans- particularly genre savvy otakus- as the protagonists is going to be nearly impossible to stretch the audience's suspension of disbelief over. Now, it's your story, and you can do what you want, but I've been around and, let me tell you, this is going to get some fairly harsh- and admittedly accurate- criticism for being an overused premise.

There's some notes. Best of luck on whatever you do though.

7470401 hehehe I wonder why.

7470546 yeah I'd be open for a cross over.

7470613 yo ho and fiddle de dee you are a pirate!

7470640 how do you mean a different angle for the conflict, are we talking about an antagonist surfacing or an event that puts them at odds with the princesses? Yeah I have someone I'm planning on commissioning to make the cover art but they are full atm for now there is a placeholder.

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It was me! I did it!

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How familiar are you with Super Sentai?

7471349 let's see I've seen power rangers up to jungle fury, vr troopers, big bad beetleborgs, a few EPs of Kamen rider, yes I know of the gokai version of power rangers, though only ever watch one episode.

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Well, good enough, I suppose. So, how's about it? Wanna cross with a silver clad pirate?

7471628 sure

wow you actually went with that version of the female Archer install um I I'm not sure how to take that