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neokiva


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Am I really ready to invest more time into reading yet another displaced Twilight fic that may or may not stop updating at any given moment in time? :trixieshiftleft:

Hell yes I am! :yay:

LET'S DO THIS! :rainbowdetermined2:

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the internet has trained me to think of this as leeroy jenkins

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That's basically how I feel when it comes to reading displaced and/or evil Twilight fics. All of them have the capacity to be amazing, but they usually either fall short of expectations or are really good, but stop updating way too early.

I'm working on my own displaced Twilight fic at the moment (like I literally stopped writing to type this) so I'll read this later, but I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this! :twilightsmile:

umm... the last section of this chapter is a little weird, is that all supposed to be there?

Comment posted by neokiva deleted Apr 28th, 2018

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sorry about that, there were discussion notes that I forgot to remove from the chapter. after twi and Csia sleep is the end. so don't worry i didn't go evangelion on people.

Well this is a fun story I look forward to seeing where this goes and what worlds she ends up traveling to.

At some point, this fic has to crossover with Sweetie Chronicles...

This is way too juicy to do otherwise....

Twilight collapsed and groaned, “Oh yeah this one is going to take a good long while to regenerate. Though it shouldn’t super-tier magic doesn’t cost mp usually….” before darkness claimed her.

This line is confusing me. Is there an error here or no?

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Okey sounds like somebody is happy with the story so far lets see how well you like the coming chapters.

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Done already... and i want more!
*insert manic Pinkamena smile*

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well what i meant was that super-tier magic doesn't normally have an mp cost but it did have one for some reason.

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cool your jets the next chapter is almost ready needs to go through editing.

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Oh I remember it now it crossed over with backwards through the mirror, that fic where twilight becomes a fey changeling.

Now This is what I call a story! I have always loved reality hopping, and reality warping, both in one story is just epic.

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You mean Sweetie Belle became a fey changeling, right?

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she does but in backwards through the mirror twi becomes one before meeting the cussing sweetie belle

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Ah... did that happen?...
Hmm.. i might've seemingly forgot that... been a little bit since i last refreshed my memory on the fic....

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Well with the new set up to post from docs which is copy and past it's hard to remember when we have discussions on the chapter page's instead of a discussion box or through notes.

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it's funny because among her classes is cleric, high priestess, alchemist and pharmacist. so technically she is a nurse/doctor.

if she returns home and not much time has passed since she left then i pity chrysalis

8893141 Thank you so how many worlds will Twilight go through before finding her true home? or is she the 'new' Doctor?

8893396 Good one, but for real she never going to find her way home?

Please keep this amazing story coming!! :pinkiehappy:

oh boy i hope twi goes back to equestrai before the wedding with god tier lvl power and brings the family with her

There are so many places I want to see the Twilight visit I can even name them all:
Harry Potter, One piece, Marvel, Gravity Falls, Skyrim, the list is endless

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well that would be spoilers darling.

“Don't worry, it’ll be quick and painless,” Twilight reassured holding up the creatures heart, “see, you are already dead,” Twilight smiled kindly as the creature collapsed.

Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru!

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God now I'm just imagining Twilight going toe to toe with Thanos.

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isn't thanos a god and immortal?

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Honestly I'm not sure how strong he actually is without the infinity stones. Even at the start of the movie he already has the power stone. But with just a few of the stones in his possession he is pretty much a god.

It’s been twenty eight years since that bitch, impersonating herself as my foal sitter, sent me to another world.

Ok, then. I'm pretty sure Equestria's a wasteland by this point.

I'm unsure if I love this more for her being a member of Nazarick or her being a member of the ever amusing Troi family. Nice touch that she now considers herself more dragon than not. I like that choice. Hm... does this mean some weird events will happen/have happened that will make it so Spike actually is her son?

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Honestly not sure on the spike front how I would even do something like it, let alone whether I want to.

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No worries. I just figured I'd ask given what has happened.

That explanation on losing experiance reminded me of the anime Log Horizon.
Also Badass Twilight is best Twilight. Worship her. All Hail Twilight!

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sorry but I am in the midst of writing a lot of stories, so I got to balance everything.

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