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Huh, I forgot this even existed.
8547980
Heh well I guess it's a good thing I'm doing this then.
8548009
well according to Fim the original author did show up last October.
good story. Will this story be updated any further? Its a real shame this story was left go.
i enjoy this story so i glade u try to take it over
8548022
Actually I triple checked all it says is october and no year and his last interactions were 2015 and even if he did show up it didn't amount to anything.
8548046
Of course that was the point. Chapter 10 is in the works/ edit stage.
haven't read this yet, gonna but I must say...
7 years, 9 weeks and 3 days? that's only specific and I LOVE IT! is not the cliche and overused century, thousand or millennia!
8552720
Hope it doesn't dissapoint under a lot of pressure with this story.
If the captain's name is Optimus I will laugh.
Poor Luna, she took an arrow......to the knee.
8558389
Lol
EEEEE!!! I'm so happy to see this continue!! Keep up the good work! ^^
Interested in seeing your take on this story!
8558389
She took more than just one arrow to more than just her knee. I think she was made into a pincushion full of arrows or something.
You should put thoughts into quotations of some kind. They're a bit difficult to pick out in the middle of a paragraph.
8562440
All thoughts are in italics which is grammatically correct.
8562440
If you have trouble distinguishing then try a different reading format.
8558409
i expect to see updates as i really liked the original story and this still has so much room for continuation!!!
8558409
i expect to see updates as i really liked the original story and this still has so much room for continuation!!!
8627264
I am going to update it though I have been busy. I got seven stories(including this one) I am actively working on alongside giving aid to another author who has been having difficulties with motivation.
8627815
great
This story has a very crucial setting wich i have not seen barely any stories have, wich is a budding relationship between Twi and Luna where they are for most of the story seamingly not shouldered with Equestria and duties to Equestria, just the two of them exploring, surviving and living in a brave new world. It leaves a lot of ways for them to have some semblance of peace while they explore both the world and get their relationship tempered by things you normally do not see a lot. It feels fresh and exciting. Can't wait to see how Luna and Twilight develop in this setting. Also your avatar is super adorable Neokiva. It makes me happy.
incoming girly squeeel i didnt know this story got reposted i ws sd when the author stoped writing it now its bck re read time
8552745
hey question i haven't read the original in ages but did you highly alter some parts of this story because it isnt matching up with my memories of the story
like the first city coming under attack so quickly also i remember that luna told the king or whaterver he is that they were diplomats or somthing from a far-off city
Edit never mind i was thinking of kinetics another story similare to this i belive
8772093
yeah it's almost completely the same minus some fixes to grammar and spelling i caught. also kinetics is another story I want to see finished, and the twilight was Dark tonight and scarlet revelry
This has my interest and my attention...
Holy throne...
Oh shit.... Nightmare....
When I saw that Skyrim reference, I nearly busted out laughing.
18 nov 2017-last update
15 may 2018-today
ummmmmm
I mean i've seen longer times between updates but, this is starting to be concerning unless your going for anually which means this is obviously on the back burner.
just asking.
8927988
I am in the midst of writing the next chapter but please remember I have more than one or two stories to worry about.
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i know i just hoped you had something and forgot about it, i've had that happen to me before i had one chapter all typed up and was working on the next one when someone commented and K realized it never published.
No comment
Those tactics were..... interesting to say the least.
I wont judge. Keep up the good work soldier, Aperture Sciences out.
Damnit Nightmare.
Wait... this story was dead?
NECROMANCY!!!!
STAMINA FOR DAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYSAH!!!!!!!!!!!
Song i have stuck in my head
I so called it as soon as I saw this. I love the reference.
Now back to reading.
update?
9086491
just updated
and a good update it was. I liked it.
This story sounds similar to another story where Twilight and Luna get trapped in another world. I'm fairly sure the story had a different name and I know I have the story tracked, but I'd have to dig through a metric ton of other tracked stories to find it. It was a good story though.
It's alive!
9091923
you are probably thinking of this one.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/72576/kinetics
9092012
Yeah, that was it. That was a good story and the author stopped updating just when it was really vetting good. Damn shame...
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Yesfinally AN UPDATE I NEED TO GET OUT THE CHAMPAGNE!!
9091923
It is either called kinetics or its the original version of this story.