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Eon Seb


Just a brony who likes to read in his free time and pitch ideas around when he gets bored, and now wants to try his hand at writing. Luna help us all :)

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Ponyville has lived in fear of its newest resident for 5 years the mysterious Midnight Void and on the eve of the summer sun celebration this hermit may be Equestrias last hope. The great darkness approaches, with secrets long forbade, a false royals greatest lie will be broken on the brightest day.

Now proofread by Draco Loco, Comickook and edited by G33kySt3v3

As of Chapter 13 Rated T (just to be safe)

Dark tag added for themes introduced in chapter 22 and prevalent in 23

Gore for Vamponies and Sex tag for situations and innuendo.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 73 )

Whoa. Pretty emotional flashback. I definitely feel sorry for Twi - er - Midnight. Getting exiled and her name taken away over an accident. Admittedly, I'm not really into same gender-pairings (unless they are specifically in the characters' character), but I don't hold it against anyone who does like that stuff and I won't let it stop me from enjoying this story. Anyway, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Well, Sunburst and Moondancer apparently eventually forgave Twilight for the accident, but the Ponyville natives don't seem to like Midnight much. Then again, it's not that different from their attitudes concerning Zecora at first. Anyway, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Well, that explains a lot. :-D And Twi, unknowingly, saved herself and her future friends some future hassles with the Plunder Vines. At any rate, once more, the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Thanks for the reviews. I feel i should warn you there will be more shipping involved in the future. I am trying my hardest to make each relationship look as believable as possible, so each one will be pre-established and explained, or have a hopefully reasonable build up.

7480546 Thanks for the fair warning. And you are quite welcome.

Hello there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, you did a great job on the exchanges (particularly concerning Twilight's explanations concerning the Elements AND the bit from the Tree of Harmony itself), emotional content (especially after they all learned [at least part of] the truth behind Twilight's exile) and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hello there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Again, a great job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in this chapter. Not much I can say that I haven't already, but I'll definitely still be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

But then who sent twilight that document

7512681 the Guards who arrested her had all the documents, including the one with her new name, (Spoilers for ch.6 ahead)
The signatures may have been fake but she had no time to verify that at the time, and lets face it this is still Twilight her brain always jumps to conclusions

7513249 see i thought it would have been a clever trick from a villain, take out the one pony who brought the others together then the elements never exist

Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hello there. Yeah, things are definitely heating up. I still don't know who the first mystery figure is, but the second one almost has to be Chrysalis. At any rate, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up. And yeah, Twi/Midnight and Mr. Rich MIGHT have some common ground at that. Anyway, on to the next chapter.

Hello there. Thanks again for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And I DO enjoy helping you out with these chapters.

Hey there. Thanks for sharing these chapters with us. I really appreciate you going to the effort. I also appreciate how you are letting me help you by doing semi-quick edits. Anyway, once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Hey there once again. Thanks greatly for sharing this work with us. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, you did a very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Now, I'm on to the next chapter.

Again, you did a splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked Twilight Velvet's reactions to Midnight's handling of certain Everfree denizens. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hey there. Thanks greatly for going to the effort of sharing this work with us. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked how Midnight took Nightmare's revelations in stride and the reasons she did. And I got a kick out of seeing them get the last laugh on those bullies. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hey there. Thanks again for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort of sharing your work. I, again, thank you for liking my edits. Anyway, the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.

Again, you did a very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And, again, I'm glad to help you with the editing. Well, on to the next chapter.

Once again, superb job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

7562944 Glad to hear it. Mind telling me what you enjoyed most?

NOOOOOO! i ran out of story to read what am i supposed to do now. (starts crying)

7563167 (hands box of tissues) don't worry I should have more up by next week :twilightsmile:

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Excellent to see Scoots getting more love than she needs as a Changeling. :-D . The scene with Dinky was downright beautiful too. :-D

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this chapter up. I really like the world-building elements. And, as usual, the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up are all well-done in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Doesn't this mean Trixie is next?

7590788 You mean Photo finish? :coolphoto: : Trixie was back in chapter 6 :trixieshiftright:

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Oh, guess I wasn't paying attention.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

I have a feeling that Photo and Twilight are related, Tis true or nay?

7591683 She's Hoity Toity's Wife and the mother of Vinyl Scratch, They know one another but are not related.

Once again, thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once more, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

7609442 Well without the 2 hot heads arguing and the party pony causing an indecent they were able to actually get the facts straight. Plus come on would you have argued in that situation.

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I argue in every situation, and then make rude jokes.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hello there. Thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, great job on the exchanges, humor, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, excellent job on the action, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Yeah, it was gruesome but we WERE fairly warned and, as you told me in the Personal Messages, it is both important to the plot AND provides a means for the main villain of Season 1 to be exposed. At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Hey there. Thanks for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. And I also thank you for letting me help with the edits. At any rate, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, onto the next chapter.

Again, thanks very much for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, I also thank you for letting me help you with the editing. Once more, excellent job on the emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow. And I have a feeling this mystery villain will definitely end up paying the price for his overconfidence.

I'm looking forward to the face he's going to make after losing to Twilight. Should be priceless.

She swallowed the attack like it was a hayburger.

best metaphor I've ever heard.

Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the second-to-last chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. I also thank you for letting me edit this for you. As usual, very good job on the exchanges, emotional content, action, action and final chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Once again, great job on this chapter. The exchanges, emotional content, season wrap-up and future season set-up are all well done in all the right places. :-D

So... When's season 2?

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