• Member Since 20th Feb, 2016
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Eon Seb


Just a brony who likes to read in his free time and pitch ideas around when he gets bored, and now wants to try his hand at writing. Luna help us all :)

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This is part of most of my AU's for Equestria showing the human 5 and Sunsets reaction to some of the changes some will be mentioned in passing others will be made quite obvious. now lets see what the girls think of their pony selves.

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Comments ( 10 )

Nice hook, but then you go and cut the line. What happened to every pony? :rainbowderp:

this is just meant to be a hook If your interested I was using this as a test to see if anyone like this AU or not.

Let me know what you think, good or bad as long as you stay professional I wont mind. :twilightsmile:

No flames please this is my first story :fluttershysad:

GUESS WHOS BACK FROM VACATION?!? Sorry. This is the first story that pulled up so I decided ta say somethin'. XP

I have to admit, this IS actually a pretty good short story. Darn good references to your AU. The exchanges, emotional content and wrap-up were all well done in all the right places.

Hey there. I just have a thought; if you decide to do a short sequel to this story (set at the end of your universe's Season 5), how would Twi's human counterpart take to a face-to-face meeting and chat with Midnight? :-D

Sorry. Got off on a bit of a tangent there.

7514819 who says they are going to meet after the movie. :trollestia: ( I'll explain in a PM for anyone who doesn't mind spoilers)

7515108 LOL! Yeah, I suppose that's a good point. (and yeah, I AM curious)

Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, the exchanges, emotional content, humor and wrap-up were all well done in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of your work as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Not much I can say other than great job on this chapter. Thanks for giving me the chance to assist with the edits. At any rate, the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up are all well-done in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

Thanks very much for getting this up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Again, I appreciate you letting me help you with the edits and you did an excellent job on the exchanges and emotional content in all the right places, as usual. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.

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