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Rose Quill

Author of the Homecoming series, occasional contributor to Bodyguard!AU, and food aficionado. Please consider joining my Patreon



This story is a sequel to Just Another Day

During a continued investigation of the portal, Twilight and Sunset find the energy emitted by the portal has increased dramatically. Sunset can feel the energy emanating from several feet away, and it triggers a vision.

Continuity: Homecoming

Revised 11-4-17

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Heh, I was planning on touching on the abilities in my stories. My theory is because Rarity and Sunset are unicorns, their powers are different. Unicorns have natural spellweaving, so shields and mind-reading are already possibilities if you learn how.

Course I would have Princess Twilight taking Pinkie's power warily, with a mental note not to tell her Pinkie Pie about it.

For what Pinkie can do, I've long held the belief she is a natural user of chaos magic. Her antics jumped up a notch after Discord broke free and was later released and reformed.

Dash and AJ were already drawn into another video competition while Pinkie and Sunshine brainstormed desserts. Rarity and Fluttershy were

I think you dropped half a sentence a few blocks back.

Ooh, interesting! I wonder what this all is gonna lead up to. I guess I'm gonna look forward to March 1st, then. :twilightsmile:

Pinkie and the Laws of Physics have an agreement; She does whatever she wants and they ignore her, thereby saving an absolute buck-ton on ulcer and headache medicine! :rainbowlaugh:


Silly sentence fragments, running away when I take my eye off them. :flutterrage:

This like all of your other work was a good read and I enjoyed it very much I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Such good talent and such wonderful work like this really should have a movie or tv show done about this. :twilightsmile:

7897466 They always come home eventually. It's those periods and quotation marks you have to watch for, they just poof out of existence. Good addition to the ongoing story as usual!


I doubt they'd hire me as a script writer, though. Hasbro seems to be tight knit with it's writers.

7897754 That's to bad because you do have a wonderful talent and are indeed a wonderful writer. Your work has been very well done, very well thought out and very well put together. I liked each story that you have produced and enjoyed every bit of them. :twilightsmile:

March!? You monster. :raritydespair:


Can't say I didn't warn you between this and a blog post. February is work on original stuff month. I will put out a valentines day story, something suitably fluffy, heart warming and tooth-rotingly sweet.


Don't get me wrong, I'd love to get on there, even if it is just for story books.

Though I'd really love to see Azure show up even as just a background pony. :heart:

7898096 I know, i only tease. Looking forward to the Valentine's story and whatever's in between though. :twilightsmile:

Okay, the vision things were kind of creepy, but I liked the moments that leaned towards SunLight.

Through the audio commentary I found out the key to Pinkie’s explosive power: What she detonates is sugar, which makes a lot of sense, since sugar contains so much energy! There was a lot of hilarity over the box-of-nails scene about the story taking a sudden left turn into horror, too. :rainbowderp:

Oh ho. Very intriguing developments here. This does suffer from a key weakness of this series in that it feels much more like a chapter in a larger story than something that stands on its own merits, but it's still deeply intriguing. I'm sure I'll enjoy further investigation.

So I'm guessing that somehow the Sirens are drawing upon the energy.

Also, what if what Twilight is missing is that Equestria is LOOSING magic while Human World is GAINING magic?

I love how natural the dialogue feels in these stories. Also, this is probably my favorite EQG Rainbow Dash, including the one from the actual specials. She maintains her devil-may-care attitude, without coming across as a total asshat.

Ooohhh the mystery! Nice!

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