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Dee Bee Doo-wop Cooper


Fire, Water, Earth, Bear

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Twilight's life takes a turn for the worse when she meets a crazed, sword wielding pony on the outskirts of Ponyville. Now she must learn to cope and cooperate with the voice of a long dead general and traitor in her head. But, Twilight's sanity isn't the only thing up for grabs.

An army of death has been building in the north and as it advances towards Equestria, it grows with every corpse. The ancient Aspects of nature have once again been revealed to the world and once again, war is beginning.

Equestria will have to rely on there princess of magic to protect them, but how can they when Twilight can't even rely on herself anymore?
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It's time for another Adventure fic, and I promise that this one will have at least 50% more adventure than my last one. It will also be much darker than my last one (Still not anywhere near grim-dark though).

Crossover with the Warcraft Universe. Though to be fair, I am mostly borrow names and vague concepts from them, most of this is original content (do not steal...(joking, I really don't care what you do with it)).

P.S. the reason there is an other character tag instead of an OC character tag is because all of the characters not from FIM are re-imaginings of Warcraft characters and thus not original.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 54 )

Hahaha. I love the cover art of this. Twilight wielding Frostmourne. Excellent idea here, a little rough around the edges, but I like it. The beginning where Twilight knocks the other pony out for no reason baffled me for a minute, must have over looked something, and then there is this:

Celestia let out a sigh, “No. She doesn’t know how. I taught her that there are ways that Alicorns can die, but she does not know any of them. She will likely lock herself up where she thinks no one will look.”

Seems contradictory, might I suggest "I taught her that Alicorns can die, but didn't go into detail."

Volunteer to edit, you say?

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Thank you very much for the praise. I spent a lot of time on both the story and the picture. As for the knocking out part, I should probably add a little more internal dialogue to explain that. The idea is that Arrested Thesis was actually speaking not thinking and Twilight overhears him and then when he attacks her she is defending herself with magic. As for the part you quoted, I'm not sure I see what you mean, but that is mostly because I wrote it and know exactly what I meant. I will definitly see what I can do to clear that up.

Voleenteer to edit, you say

Did I hear a hand raise?

Interesting. I think I'll be reading this.

Oh... and uhm... here.

Tired of long years spent toiling under the chains of his ‘special talent’, restricting the bounds between which science and magic could be studied and tested, and earning little but the disrespect and despise of the researchers of Equestria.

Spite is the word I assume you mean to use here. You can't earn despise since its kind of an action.

3734744 Do you have a particular song in mind? to hum that is.

Joking aside, I hope you enjoy my re-imagining of the Warcraft characters and story.


3737532 I never thought of it like, I'll change that right now.Thanks!

This updated, and I didn't get a notification... wtf FIMFiction.

3798013 It says you don't actually have the story favorited, maybe that's why?

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Currently, that must be the reason. In the past, I've had it and other stories attached into the "read later" section and I swear that I've received story update notifications through it.

All well, problem solved.

3799530 Yeah, I remember that as well but they are always making changes to the site though.

Loving it make more also are you looking for oc's?

Umm. Your italics didn't work over from GDocs. I think you need the bracket format " [ " for FimFiction.

3932172 Oh, whoops.

I fixed it now, I still get the code for DA and FIMFiction mixed up sometimes.

3928909 Not at the moment. However, if I end up needing more than two royal guards with names, I will let you know.

3936721 Will she get some of the WoW:WotLK Artas' abilities?:rainbowderp:

3947812 Definitely, I want to work in anywhere from some to a lot of familiar material for fans of Warcraft but also drive my own path with it, and elements like combat style and names are great ways to do that.

Hello dear author, I must say it's one of the best fic's that I ever read, and continue pls. Now my question: Will Kel'Thuzad(or Arthas in particular) meet Twilight?

(Arthas might rage because of Frostmourne in Twilight's hooves.)

3951067 Thank you so much for the complement, it means so much to me when I hear things like that! As for your question, Kel'Thuzad is definitely a part of the story (spoilers!). Arthus (or his character) is actually recently deceased. The pony carrying Frostmourne was named Arrested Thesis because if you blend the two together you almost get Arthus out of it. So that was his little cameo.

3958029 Complement? The one below? Okay.

And thanks, but another question: Kel'Thuzad in normal or pony form?

3958408 Certainly not human, but as to what race he is, I haven't really decided yet, but even if I had...

:trollestia:spoilers

Found this on bloods homepage thing.

It's going to be interesting to see a mlp/war craft cross. Almost as weird as the war hammer 40K ones.

4122891 At least MLP and Warcraft share a fantasy theme, that and Warcraft isn't nearly as dark and depressing as 40K.

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I was away for the summer but i am working on it again. Glad you enjoy it so far though.

so when is a new chapter going to be?

5517694 Hopefully not long. It is written, I just need my editor to get through it and then it will be posted.

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You sent me a chapter? Send it to me again and I'll get it done this weekend.

5813733 Don't worry it is gibberish based off of Latin. You can probably still read fine.

it's nice to see this being updated. even if it was half a year later.

Well enough with the last nightmare. Anyways really like the story and zombies in ponyville bit gotta love zombies

5815987 Next chapter is going to have some really good fighting in it.

The f on far, the open word for the chapter, it needs to be capitalized.

Whoops.

I miss OG Warcraft. So much.

leave it to Celestia to turn an initial assault on ones person into a freaking lesson.

So not to be that one guy, but... update soon?

This made me get my Warcraft 3s out and play them. I'm almost done with them.

6864221 im almost done with the next chapter, it would have been up sooner but I got a cold on vacation and then when I got back I got the flu, which I am just now almost recovered 100% from. I just need to work out one scene and then it will be off to get edited.

I am glad you are enjoying it and thank you very much for saying so!

6867006 more also twilight better get some cool armor

Cool. Can't wait for the fight!

The only thing that prevents me from reading the story is it's a TwiDash :ajsleepy:

For a story that promises had to have this serious problem. :raritycry:

7047318 I'm sorry to hear that, I could say something that might convince you to try but it would ruin most of the ending so...

Its to bad you won't be reading but ai hope you can find something more to your tastes.

7046770 Cliff hangers... Yeah, I like those a lot. Glad you are enjoying the story, I really hope to get the next chapter out a lot sooner than this last one.

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Mmm ... Now That I Intrigue. I'll read it, and I will passeth The Essenes Twidash.:duck:

7047992 the very beginning of chapter three is probably the most touchy feely this story will ever get, that being said it is very cuddly, so watch out for that. The rest of it will mostly be subtle. I am am a big believer in the idea that if it isn't important to the main story it doesn't belong, and a big huge romance is definitly not the direction I am taking this.

Anyways, it would be awesome if you gave it a shot, but even if in the you decide to stop reading it thats okay. It is more important to me that you read something you enjoy than that you read my story.

Oh thank Celestia,”
“You are quite welcome, my little pony.”
Both Twilight and Dash spun to face the door, finding both Princess Celestia and Luna walking in.

Hah! :trollestia:

Cant wait for the next chapter

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