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Dec
18th
2017

ER251st Chapter 4 is live · 12:51am 8 hours ago

Empress Rarity's 251st Birthday Chapter 4 has been updated! The story is live, Autumnschild will have Chapter 5 in a few weeks to start working on as well. Hopefully, I can keep chapter updates to a monthly rhythm.

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Hallowed Horrors

  • Let Her In It's cold outside and all Fluttershy wants is for Apple Bloom to let her in. by TooShyShy 2,675 words · 6,940 views · 777 likes · 20 dislikes
  • The Restless Corpse of Sunset Shimmer In the basement of an abandoned house, Sunset Shimmer's body lies cold. A lone explorer has found it. Now, he needs to ensure it doesn't find him. by boardgamebrony 3,522 words · 3,889 views · 395 likes · 19 dislikes
  • Forever Faithful The best students are always faithful...even in death. by Konseiga 3,345 words · 35,442 views · 2,689 likes · 89 dislikes
  • A FLEet|ng LIght |n thE DArknEsS Ponyville was deserted, and only this journal remains as a record of what occurred. by Flashgen 8,117 words · 20,532 views · 1,116 likes · 23 dislikes

Birthday-verse Stories.

  • Empress Rarity's 250th Birthday Today is the Birthday of the Empress of the Crystal Empire, Rarity Belle. Everypony is excited for the celebrations, that is everypony except for one... by Lord-Commander 113,695 words · 5,109 views · 534 likes · 19 dislikes
  • Empress Rarity's 251st Birthday With her birthday just days away, everything is falling apart for Empress Rarity. Stolen away from her home and her ponies, can Rarity still trust those she once called friends, or will she lose everything? by Lord-Commander 29,290 words · 1,054 views · 160 likes · 4 dislikes
  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday Today is Princess Twilight Sparkle’s 500th birthday! And her most faithful student, an earth pony with a familiar name, can’t wait to celebrate! by Autumnschild 12,759 words · 17,205 views · 1,908 likes · 25 dislikes
  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday The sequel to Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday by Autumnschild 104,072 words · 10,674 views · 1,235 likes · 18 dislikes
  • Princess Twilight Sparkle's 25th Birthday Three fillies from the future find themselves trapped in the past among familiar strangers. Can they return to their own time without changing the fate of the world? Probably not. by Autumnschild 34,386 words · 4,984 views · 681 likes · 12 dislikes

Editor Profile

“There are few things in life that bring as much joy as the joy that comes from assisting another improve his or her life.” - Richard G. Scott
 
One of my joys on FiMFiction is being an editor because I get to help someone make their dreams into a reality. How many others can say that about what they do? I base my writing and also my editing on this:
 
"The object of fiction isn't grammatical correctness but to make the reader welcome and then tell a story..." - Stephen King, On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft
 
Don't get me wrong, I want to make sure the story you are sending to me is grammatically sound, but I am far more focused on if you have a good story than if a comma is required or not. When I edit, I look at things such as character design (are they correctly represented, no Mary Sues), if the plot makes sense, and if the sentences flow nicely. Is the detail in your story enough to make sense of things, or are you avoiding the Lavender Unicorn Syndrome? Those kinds of things are my focus, how well your story is represented is my focus. For that, I note myself as a story editor.  
 
My schedule varies on how free I am to edit, but my door is usually open. Just send me a message or comment on my page if you need an editor.
 
Editor Details: (Administrator for Editors-R-Us)
Preferred Story Type(s): Adventure, Comedy, Dark, Sad, Slice of Life.
Preferred Story Length: >1500
Refused Story Type(s): Human in Equestria and clopfics (Nothing against the types, but I have very, very little experience editing these types and you'd be best finding a better able person.)
Editing Medium: I prefer GDocs, but I can work with almost anything. (I am not mailing a notebook back to you)
 
Stories I've Edited
Princess Twilight Sparkle's 500th Birthday, Princess Twilight Sparkle's 505th Birthday, The name's Burt. Just Burt., The Gift Horse, Running Late in Manehatten, The 37th Librarian, Princess Twilight Sparkle's 25th Birthday, A Dinky Hearth's Warming Eve (Eve), An Icy Existence, Dashie (On Hiatus), The Hanging of Twilight Sparkle, Trixie's Last Letter, One Last Crusade, Not So Pink-ie Pie, Shoots and Roots, In Memoriam, Farewell, Those Forgotten, Echoing Silence, Learning Curve, From Caramel to Toffee, Hindsight, What Society Expects from a Princess

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2469677
Yeah I understand that. Writing again is weird but I'm slowly trying to get my old style back again. Never really stopped being fun though. I'll be reading all the stuff you've posted that I've missed since I left!

2469675
Life is decent. I had to hiatus my story for a bit, and I'm working on a few others in the mean time. Took a break from editing and only recently stepped back into that.

2469669
Good! I've been back for a minute and stopping in to all my old friends seeing how they are doing. How about you?

2469452
Yup. How are things going?

I'm happy to see that you're still here, Lord-Commander:twilightsmile:

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